All Comments on 'Joyce's Auction'

I forgot, but thanks to D. for the wonderful editting job.

Up in the night, insomnia again. Too tired to write but this was exactly what i needed to make the night worthwhile. And i am sure i will sleep soon now. Sighs and yawns. Thank you xantu

now that's a story..definately one HELL of a story..giving me chills thinking about it

I just sooooo love your writing and am ecstatic to see you with new stuff.

Keep up the great work

As with all of your stories, it was exciting.

But, I have to say that the dialogue seemed a bit robotic and at times unrealistic, especially from Joyce (the lengthy conversation at the manor gate comes to mind). Have you tried reading the lines out loud? With someone else would be even better, if you know anyone who would do it with you.

Keep up the good work!

As with all of Your stories set in this scene, it was fantastic. thank You Sir

Very hot, thank you for this story.

This was really a great story. It works as either a stand-alone story or the introduction of a new character (Joyce). If this is only Joyce's first adventure, then I cannot wait to read more of her stories.

Thank you again for this story.

I really, really want to be Joyce!

Grand Master writing, plotting, character development--absolutely fabulous!!!

This is the second time i have read this story and i think i enjoyed it more the second time round. Excellent characterization and plenty of Joyce's emotions on display.

Thank you Master Dweaver for yet another fantastic story.

The willing auction of a submissive wanting to be dominated was a delightful tale, well told.

Thank you.