All Comments on 'Juanita 'n Dito Ch. 01-03'

Hi Dito,

Well done for finally getting to publish. It is a gentle and haunting opening. The addition of a soundtrack is inspired.

A well deserved and encouraging five stars.

Hugs

Anna

xxx

Nice start.

Hi Anna.

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and your heartwarming advise.

Now it's out of my hands and I await anxious the comment of readers.

Hugs dear Anna

D.

XXX

At the outset I have to say that I don't care much for dominant/submissive fiction unless there is a fair leavening of humour or tenderness in it (different strokes for different folks I guess). Nor do I care for sado-masochism which seems to be the way this story is heading. However, I do care a great deal for good writing and this part is certainly well-written to the extent I've given you five stars. And you've finished on a promising and intriguing cliff-hanger so I'll certainly read your next part to see where you are taking this story. Good luck with it.

Thank you so much Maonaigh. I hope I won't dissappoint you in the coming chapters.

D.

...and so, I have now entered upon the path of your "very slow and long story".

I am eager to experience this journey....take me with you!

Well written and enticing.....