All Comments on 'Juanita 'n Dito Ch. 04-06'

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Maonaigh about 4 years ago

Quality

The quality of your writing shines through this story of mounting desire and obsession. When you have finished this story, you should seriously consider staying with Lit and giving us more excellent work.

Anonymousabout 4 years ago

What a cliffhanger. This is getting exciting. Can't wait for the next few part.

DiTo_D about 4 years agoAuthor

@Maonaigh: I have to admit it's thanks to RandyD1369's patience that it reads as it does, since I'm not a native English speaker. His advise helped a lot.

@SB: you don't have to wait long... they added the next already..

Thank you so much for your nice comments.

paulthewetcd about 4 years ago

Symmetry for everything

This is going very well, very well indeed!

You have brought us along the journey of your awakening in an artful manner.

I am captivated and aroused....

Well done!

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