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Click herePerhaps not immediately visible, but if you looked closer you could see that my arm was over her shoulder and that my hand disappeared into the catsuit and held her breast and that she was about to put her tongue in my ear. We had been pretty tipsy that night and, now that I am thinking of it, very horny.
Where was that damn photo?
My eyes scanned the wall. I was getting a little nervous now, perhaps it might not have been such a good idea to take Juanita here. '
My eyes feverishly searched ... Juanita stopped stirring and left the spoon in the sauce while she stood up slowly. Oh no, she had seen it and went to the photo. I decided to follow her. She studied the picture and I stood diagonally behind her and offered her the beer. Without saying a word, she took it and took a sip, her eyes still focused on me and my hand that ... '
"Hmm, Dito, that is one hell of a daring photo to hang in public like that." She looked at me and winked.
I laughed a bit shyly and said, "Oh, it's been so many years ago and well, we had a little too much to drink and ..." '
She held up her beer to signal that I should keep my mouth shut, turned around and walked back to the table. When she sat down, she immediately started.
"My first boyfriend wanted to be a photographer. He had a nice digital SLR camera with different lenses and knew a lot about photography. He always had his camera with him and took photos of me all the time.
When we were shopping, he photographed me in the reflection of the shop windows.
When we were eating, he took pictures while I put something in my mouth.
If we were sitting on a bench somewhere, or along the water's edge, he managed to portray me in such a way that the sun was behind me and he got a beautiful silhouette. He took pictures of me by the sea while I shook the water off."
She took a bite of the tortilla she had sprinkled with some red sauce. I decided to follow her idea and also took a bite while looking at her.
Oh, Chittie, you did outstanding!!. I squeezed my eyes slightly to enjoy the taste even better and saw Juanita visibly enjoying through my eyelashes. Both of our hands went to the bottles.
"That's a nice bite, right?"
"Oh, this is great." We took a sip of beer.
Little Earthquakes, wow, another of my favs, love Tori Amos. You seem to be reading my mind with your fantasies and your music.
And I think Little Earthquakes really sums this chapter up, one surprise after another, building up to the big one of 9.8 on the Richter scale.
This series continues to entice me and arouse me, as you bring us along this intimate journey!
Yes, the word choices and structure are atypical, but I have fallen under your trance and have adapted to your style...I have gladly succumbed
The imagery and cerebral sex are skillful.
I will continue to read on.....
@Maonaigh I blush, to much honor sir. No-one could get that smile off my face.
About your minor criticism: My editor, RandyD1369 warned me about that as well. I have a simple explanation: As they are my thoughts that pop up and disappear whenever they want, I don't get a warning, and sometimes they make me feel lost. I tried to give my readers that same feeling. One has to deal with it. ;-)
Just catching up so I'm commenting once on the last three postings. I know that English is not your first language and there are small clues (the occasional odd word construction, some words or phrases which may be correct but unlikely to be used by a native English speaker). However, except for these points your written English is excellent. The story itself and your style of writing are reminiscent of late Victorian or Edwardian erotica. My one minor criticism is that it's often not entirely clear when your narrative moves from the past to the present. That apart, from the outset this has been a first-rate piece of work and from me it's five stars for each posting.