All Comments on 'Judging Beauty'

Tedious

Your lyrical writing, combined with the insightful thoughts and observations by Beauty gave me pleasure time and time again. Wonderful! Simply wonderful.

Appreciate both the positive and negative comment given. I shall try to improve my writing skills and thank you for taking the time to read. I have enjoyed writing this story.

In my opinion a very enjoyable read , a beautiful story, no puns intended.Very tasteful.

NorthPacific

Your heart-warming comments made my day :)

Held my interest from start to finish. Thanks for making a rainy day a little brighter.

Ugh, way too wordy, I mean quarter of page one just about her name? Got so tedious I gave up by page 3. No score.

Thank you for the comments given. It's always nice to know that a romantic story can make a rainy day brighter :)

I'm sorry that the other reader did not enjoy it. I'll try to write stories which can appeal to everyone.

A rarity for Literotica. Very well done. The several incorrect verb forms, I ignored. Not surprised at the couple of negatives. The site caters, after all, to the wham bam thank you ma'm crowd mostly.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I had great fun growing with the characters, especially Beauty. I took my time.

Thank you for your constructive comment. I'm not sure where the incorrect verb forms are, but I'm kind of a perfectionist when it comes to grammar, so I'll look it up!

I also found incorrect verb forms, also mixed number and tense forms and what seemed to me rather odd syntax in places. Some of these may reflect geographical differences but your references to British history, some UK spellings rather than US, combined with US usages (no one in the UK says "gotten" except in the context of ill-gotten gains) left me wondering on which side of the pond your are based. And yet you held my interest to the end and despite the linguistic oddities I found the whole thing strangely compelling and I could not give you less than 5*. You held my interest to the end and your character and plot development was excellent and very believable. Well done.

Jim

Dear Jim, thank you for your constructive comment. I'm glad that you enjoyed Judging Beauty despite the grammatical errors :)

If anyone can give me an example of the grammatical errors, I will be grateful because sometimes I can't spot them myself. I hope that it does not reflect in my current writing.

I enjoy your writing. Yes, there are a few mistakes in grammar, but nearly every story I’ve read has some errors. Yours are not so overwhelming that the story is lost. And I will admit that it took me some time to read the entire story. It wasn’t so compelling that I read it in a single sitting. I wandered to other stories, and other tasks. But your story was compelling enough that I kept coming back until I finished it. I knew that Beauty and Greg would be together in the end, and I needed to really see it.

Overall, nicely done.

Thank you for your kind comment; I appreciate it a lot. I know it's a long story and I'm glad you made it to the happy ending.

I’ve become addicted to your stories. In the beginning I thought they were wordy and overly detailed but on second reading, they are brilliant. You draw word pictures so beautifully that I can see the characters talking in real life. Keep writing!!!

Dear Anonymous, your kind words on my writing make my day :) I hope to be able to keep on writing and live up to the standard.

This is only the 2nd story I've read but you write about, to Me, very emotionally stunted characters that yearn to get out but just can't seem to until they find that trigger person. Really interesting characters!

Thank you, jlg07. I am glad that you found my characters interesting.

I LOVED your story! ❤🧡💛 I can only imagine how much time and effort you have put into this. You are truly splendid 💜 Thank you so much for this!!

Never stop writing!! !