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All Comments on 'Judy and Joe'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Needs an editor

You need an editor. Speeding, content, flow and grammar all need major attention before you decide to past another

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
It was different.

... and simple in a way that I liked. Longer would have been better. Don't stop writing. First-person, first-time stories by women intrigue me the most.

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