All Comments on 'Judy And The Old Doctor'

There are a lot of little things that nagged at me about this story, keeping it from living up to its full potential as a fun little sex romp.

There are a few technical problems (like using a comma and a ... together, which just looks awkward), but the main thing that kept tripping me up was the style. It was very terse which prevented me from losing myself in the prose, so I'd really recommend working on your word flow. Literotica has a great editor program that has helped me a lot and I strongly encourage you to use it!

That said it was a nice story and I hope you keep posting!