by roseyfingers
I did not expect this one to be very popular. Not many comments, but a few people did not get the point and many who got the point did not like it. I enjoyed writing it but probably the next time I write something I know people won't like, I will keep it to myself.
Thank you so much for this wonderful written story. Thanks for the effort, for sharing. You are truly one of the best! Nevermind stupid critics.
This story is so perfect and hot!! Thank you so much roseyfingers and I will always look forward to your work!! I also enjoy the theme and quality of all your other work.
Please don’t hesitate to post more! I read your comment that you might not post what others don’t like. Well, the story isn’t for them. It is for the people who like and LOVE what you write, such as myself! The stuff they like is what I’m so sick of reading or bait-and-switched — modified versions that appease loudmouths in the comments. Perhaps I should also voice when I LOVE a story! We know that people tend to voice negativity and not when they experience positivity.
Anyway, I love all your stories and please don’t hesitate to post them all!
Absolutely awful.
All the women are portrayed as hopeless and worthless.
So pointless.
Oh well, read the next one
Reading about bland bimbo megasluts is like reading about inflatable plastic sex dolls. It just comes across as fake and worthless. There were some good ideas hidden in this, but the execution needs work.
Are there those in the 21st century that this story is a paraphrase for? Absolutely, masoginistic phylosiphy is probably as prevelant as when He Norma created his alternate reality in the Gorean style that today some see as a lifestyle. Justification for alternate behavioral choices is not new.
Where for me this fell short of a 5* was the predictability of many it the story twists and turns. Very little had the punch to this readers thought process. While a fun fast read it's real power was in the quite accurate presentation of the most common of the masoginistic arguments, right or wrong. That Argument. Power and Money is here presented as Fiction. In the Sex Slave Lotery the choices and perspectives were far more developed by comparison.
The irony is this work could have a label.... The names and places have been changed to protect the innocent. And be totally non fiction .. BDSM in the 21st century has many chapters of vision. This story reflects one.