All Comments on 'Jules McIan Ch. 01'

Your story is posted twice,,, i am waiting to read second installment, writing is good, story line is a bit hard to accept given the locaion of the event , but so far every thing is just fine ,, keep it up.

I do remember when i was 17 that a special Xmas service was held for Mid nite mass and i managed to fondle my girl during the service ... we did not get as far as you explain in your story but it is possible to play around in Church

A bit on the unbelievable side, but extra points for a unique setting and a sincere effort!