by PastMaster
Made love in a crawl space under the floor. Don't ask. I won't ask; I stopped reading too stupid of a story.
What is with Authors having their male characters vomit, especially multiple times? What man does that?
Lousy ending. As he even said, maybe the first time, but not all the rest. So what about the the first video, that is only the first time, not the remaining. Still needs to get divorced.
I liked the story even if I didn't like the reconciliation at the end. I'm thinking she enjoyed it after the first few times from the way she acted in the motel, hardly someone being blackmailed. Still gets a four because of the MC having to do his own investigation and being able to come up with the dirt on the cheaters.
I dunno man, reconciliation after that kind of egregious cheating is hard to swallow (phrasing #Archer) but she literally took a bullet for him--right in the chest. And she was blackmailed, at least in the beginning, although it's highly suspect that she didn't go to her husband for help; she just started fucking the dude on repeat.