All Comments on 'Julian's House'

OK for a first go. At least it was short. The story was ordinary with a trite plot. Young woman, fat and out of shape husband, young stud with a 9" cock. Don't all young studs have 9' cocks?

What's missing is tension.

get a life

The solution to this story is simple. The cheating wife gets divorced and lives happily ever after with her lover. See that was an easy ending.

Good story which you can make even better. I would like to see you continue with these characters but add more drama to the plot. Consider having this stud Julian start using Lisa for his sexual fantasies. She is already becoming subservient to him. Develop her submission as he makes it obvious she is his married fuck toy etc. Add a little more spice when he demands she service one of his buddies for instance. Perhaps a friend, associate or nosy neighbor catches her and then blackmail ensues. Does she confide in a counselor or minister who uses the info to his advantage. Just a few thought to BAM! spice it up a little as Emril says.

Get a divorce and move on. Stupid story.

She would need to lie to her husband to keep her life with him and her child.

Not wanting to give up her better than average life with her husband, but wanting her lovers cock makes her to fabricate all sorts stories to cover her actions and time she is fucking her lover.

Good story and hope to see more soon.

What the hell kind of story is this suppose to be? Cheating bitch but apparently all is well in the world. Well, Charley Brown, it doesn't work that way! Just a run of the mill cheating on husband story.

Jeff heard from an anonymous caller that Julian was doing his wife. You see, Julian makes a habit of doing other men's wives because he has a hard time getting off with single unattached women. And it just so happens that one of these wive's husband became suspicious and had Julian followed. Well, Jeff waited for Julian to come out of the locker room after practice and blind sided him with his Heavy Duty Ford truck, breaking his back and rendering everything below his waist useless. Since, word got out of his accident and why his company, not wanting people to think they condone that type of aberrant behavior, chose to let him go because the bad PR could ruin the company. Now days you can see Lisa pushing Julian in his wheelchair back and forth to the Unemployment Center where both are trying to find any job just to pay the rent on their run down little apartment. They both had risked it all for one hour and forty-five minutes of pleasure and lost. Which is a perfect example of short term consequences being stronger than long term consequences. So, if it feels good, Watch Out!

Good story just curious as to why Lisa has seeked out Julian. Was her husband uninterested, let himself get out of shape or just too busy for her as he is occupied with work. Great story just wondering about why she has strayed. Would love to more chapters on this as it has a good foundation. Thanks for sharing.

Yet another self-centered slut fucking around on another husband of whom we nothing about [or care to know at this point]. This must be Nici's relative following a similar worn out & shallow storyline. Or perhaps this DSQ's "Debbie" female character during the first 10 years of their pathetic marriage. Makes one wonder, mmm. Debra & Wayne

Thats a good ending to this pile!

hubby gets the kids n alimony n child support...then she may have to get that second job...after all prostitutes do make a lot of money....maybe she can get through college before she gets so old her body wont attract nothing but winos n old men

it is someone else's stupid plot outline. Don't post this claiming it is a story.

Somewhere there is someone who can write an interesting and erotic loving wife story. This author is not that person.

if you remove the intro about her being married then this is just a random short fuck story.

"Julian had the biggest cock she had ever seen"

How about just once someone says "he had the longest tongue" or something else original?

Oh well, at least you didn't use the overused "ropes of cum" line.

Another cheating skank and big dick stud--CRAP

at best ,,, Just not much here for me Dog

There's little sense here of why she's decided to cheat, why she chose this guy to do it with (clearly not his sparkling dialogue, which appears to have been cribbed from a 1990s porn flick) or why any of us should give a toss.

Well, I won't dignify this by calling it the worst piece of crap ever posted; because it's not good enough for that. That would be giving it some kudos even in a negative sense that it doesn't have or deserve. That being said, the female character is NOT a loving wife; she's a slut, whose behavior deserves at best, having her husband kick her fat ass to the curb, taking the kids, & letting Julian have her. This belongs in "group grope" or fetish, or "stupid slut wives" [a new category that I, for one, believes this site have to have]

My doesn't work and shes getting a little soft in the curves. Now I know that I can cheat and feel good about it. Thank you for the insight.

In this story there is sex reversal, neat.

The husband is in reality almost all house wives.

The wife is the husband working hard for what?

Seems that the author intended us to believe that our female lead was a slut in waiting for 5 years and then thanks to beach volleyball and her feelings of "electric" toward a admittadly cocky fella she knew she had to have him. Husband and marriage be damned, I mean after all wasn't her lustful feelings far more important.

Some of the description of her seemed that she was as her new lover was just a tad more than comfortable a narcissitic personality. When a woman is described as seeming to be 5-10 years younger in appearance than she really is, the person that makes that description must really be fucked up. In this case it is the author's description. There is almost NO socially redeeming value in this story luckily is just

bad fiction.

He gives up a chance to come in her mouth and shoots over her head instead. Yeh. Right. Then he never even goes slightly soft, but remains rock hard. Yeh. Right. Then he pulls out to cum on her stomach instead of in her pussy. Yeh. Right.

Cheating whore and asshole have nothing to do with LW.

There’s no story here. ‘Nuff said.

LOVE IT!!!