All Comments on 'Julie Covington McGill Ch. 04'

Oh MIss Albany. Your daddy is such a lucky man. His daughter is as gifted at writing as she is at cock sucking. Your stories always paint such beautiful images. Thank you for sharing. Definitely 5 stars.

P. S. I am hopeful this story is a bit autobiographical.

For some reason I couldn't sign in Miss Albany.

Thanks again for sharing,

B3amm3upscotty

Keep writing AlbanyGirl. We're Really enjoying this. Looking forward for more to Cum. Ohhh Goods Babyyyyy! Give it to your Aunt Chrissie..YESSSSSSSS

TBC

Nice job

5 stars

heyall

First, I apologize for forgetting that Michelle had not been fucked by Julie's spouse. Mea culpa! I did enjoy the teasing and the sex. Very arousing. Was somewhat upset at the false report of the ballgame's result. Actually the Sox won 4-2 as Kimbrel struck out the Yanks on just 9 pitches to earn the save with Judge being the last of the three strikeouts. But now what cost you a star in the rating: Please learn how to properly use commas. It was totally distracting as you continued to add totally unnecessary commas from start to finish. Please use an editor that knows how to properly punctuate. I give you credit, however, for correctly spelling "masturbating" the second time. Hope the extraneous comma problem disappears in the next chapter, which I anxiously await!

MORE ! ! !

So hard & horny

I have no idea about baseball and have little interest in the score being right wrong or indifferent (see previous comment) what I cared about was did the story flow and feel real. It certainly did that and 5 stars for creating that mental picture. I am looking forward to chapter 5

Love all the descriptions of Michelle from being in bed till the end.

This story is one of my favorites. I can feel the bond, that transcends the pure sex, and adds to it. This series has given me many hours of pleasure.

Oh Michelle,

We chatted yesterday March 30 and as I told you I was so impressed by you and what you have done and are doing. Please, please contact mw

James

london_james

This story is hot hot hot

This series is one of the more fun and interesting series I've read on here. I can't wait to read more of your work as you add more. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out.

Your stories always please, and as usual it takes more than one sitting to make it through the entire story. Keep up the fantastic work.

Your skill at describing this wonderful scene - so well done

So absolutely fucking red hot, the lucky fucker with getting a blow job from his daughter. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s UK.

I've gotten 2 'roadies' I'm amazed I didn't wreck the car both times as I shot off. Damn Mitchie your writings get better and better every time I read them! So very descriptive. You're extremely gifted as a writer. 5 stars isn't enough.

Dragonrider055

So hot, amazed dad didn't crash the car...