All Comments on 'Julie Covington McGill Ch. 05'

Nice continuation of the story, Michelle! You certainly got my motor running. I'm looking forward to more of this tale. Five stars well deserved! Keep it up! I will!

Hey little girl, long time no chat!

I see you’ve blossomed into quite the prolific writer. Why am I not surprised?

Loved to character development and the emotion in the lovemaking.

Keep up the good work.

—peebudy

This is living up to it's potential

Great story Michelle. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!

So glad to see you writing again!

Good writing, good tease, good sex...

I'm glad you continued the story. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

What a well written and sexually hot piece. Good anticipation and build up with a nice explosion at the end. Well done young lady...oh and yes I like trains *wink*

The first few paragraphs alone that reveal Michelle's thought process while driving through the toll plaza was worth the price of admission, As always the thinking is even hotter than the actual acts.

It felt too short which is a another way of saying you left me wanting more.

What an exciting and erotic chapter.

I wish you were my sexy daughter.

Great writing. Makes me so hard. I wish my face was substituted for Julie's.

Hurry and keep going.

I do hope Julie and jj turn michelle into their pet

treating her as they would king

absolutely my favorite fantasy

les_carrie@yahoo.com

Omg, please write more about this type of seduction from an older, sexy woman...

I've been catching up on your writing. You should have no worries as you are a very good story teller. I implore you to continue the McGill stories.

I have read most of your stories now, and I have to say they are quite lovely. The pacing is nice and the character development is quite good for an erotic short story. Thank you very much!

Enjoyed them hugely. It would be great to continue reading about Michelle's career and about her ma and pa too

I must say I rather enjoyed this series. I really hope you continue it as I too would love to find out how the meeting goes, and what happens when they come back. Don't keep us waiting too long now.

With these characters, I kinda wanna see where it goes next . . .

So craftily written! such a compelling style that totally sucks the reader into the tale!

Well, I finally got through all the chapters and just had to say what a absolutely delightful story you penned. You way with words painted many very erotic pictures. You should be proud of what you've done. Except for the mess you induced, I couldn't be happier to read more of the perversion your mind comes up with.

Thank you.

more than 5 stars. love Michelle blushing so easily and the rimming was a great idea

Omg so sucking fucking hot. Oh what would I not give to watch these two gorgeous women make out then join them, to suck and fuck them to insane levels sexual pleasure. Tongue fucking them each to two orgasms prior to fucking my cock into their cunts. I absolutely adore cunt in every way and strive to give the woman maximum pleasure before taking my own. Eating one cunt while fucking the other, then switch. Me totally drunk on cunt juice, the more I get the more I want. Fabulous. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

As I've said in the past you're an extremely gifted writer. You'reike a master printer. You draw a picture that comes to life as we gaze upon it. I love your dad/dau stories the most as I'm in a relationship with my adult daughter. 5 stars isn't high enough.

Dragonrider055

wonderful, thanks