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All Comments on 'Julie Ford?s First Time'
by leighclyde
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Anonymousover 18 years agoAll right ...
A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing sinister. Overall, pretty good.
BedtimeStories77almost 17 years agoDistraction
It was distracting how you frequently felt the need to mention that she was "18". It was as if you HAD to do a rewrite of your character so the story would pass Lit's censors.
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