All Comments on 'Julie the Nurse'

Not much romance. Just two people living together. I didn't see any emotional connection. I did see that they found each other. In my opinion, this story is pretty bare. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Joy in the midst of despair!

5

A well done flash story.

Lots of meat in few words.

Nice job, I really enjoyed it.

5*

To the other anon, this story shows love and feelings through his actions. I thought it was a nice sweet story without anything else being needed.

Regarding the earliest, anonymous comment:

My take is that this categories is filled with things labeled as romance stories that aren't more than "erotic couplings". This one really is a romance. It's brief and sketchy in some ways. Well, anyone who's read my stories (this is NOT a plug!!!) knows I tend to go way overboard in the opposite direction. But it's to the point, and it's clear where the characters' feelings come from.

A little like a wartime romance: things could be over very quickly, because of the situation. Nicely drawn.

-- WilCox49

Very good but too short

Even though the story is short, it's very beautiful and so romantic.

Good premise but far too short.

Wheres the rest of the story. A decent story, but NOT complete.

Good story but too short.