All Comments on 'Julie Wants to be a Good Girl Pt. 01'

This comment isn’t intended as an epic negative complaint and I’m definitely not blasting your writing skills because it is an erotic story.

Try checking anatomynoteDOTcom (for diagrams) the hymen is located at the entrance to the vaginal canal, it’s not a 1/3 or 1/2 way inside. Just as not all hymen’s are one intact barrier- again see diagrams, it’s not a huge deal more of a common misconception (no pun intended). Likewise a dick cannot go beyond the cervix, if something has passed beyond it, the woman is going to be in a LOT of pain and probably needs medical attention.

Good luck with your stories

Tess (uk)

Not a great story but a decent story. Spelling errors. Needs a proofreader.

What a neat little coming of cum story. In one paragraph she wnt from her vagina to pissy to "come feed the pussy".

Thanks