by Alex_likes_Butts
SO hot! The banana was an unexpected turn and was a huge turn on! Thank you, keep writing!
Great story! I am now counting down the hours until my husband gets home from work....need that cock now! Lol...thanks for the mind stimulation!
Very erotic, naughty story...my ass is craving play now. Thx!
Oh man, my cock is ROCK hard reading this gem! I love the banana thing; maybe some other foods would be nice too. Peeled hard-boiled eggs would plop right up that ass and even the ol' standby, Reddi-Whip, sprayed up her ass and mixed up with several hard cocks. Keep up the great stories!
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After all that I'd be hard again and ready to show her some DP action. Also after having a bannana squished up her ass and fucked they should use an enema to clean it all out. Taking turns to rub her full tummy etc
i dont get it. this is the second story you wrote that involved someone getting a banana shoved up their ass. is that some kind of fetish for you? you should do something like a cucumber or carrot and i also agree with the other dude that there should of been an enema...
would like to inspire others with my wifes ass pics like story inspired me
oh my.......... played with myself as I was reading.......can't wait for my boyfriend to read this one we love to act out stories .... love the ideas of the other readers... add some for the next story.......wow is my ass ready ky check banana check..... thanks for the great read
Having sex with a mushed up banana in your ass just sounds uncomfortable. Wouldn't it make a huge mess? All I can think about is that this poor girl is going to go home afterwards and shit out cum covered banana pulp.
Wow, soooooo sensual...was wet and cumming by the 2nd page...want my ass worshipped like that.
Both the banana and this silly story. She doesn't seem like a very clever person as she has just turned herself into the village bike. And she's going to believe that they won't tell anyone? This whole thing was just to implausible to be enjoyable.
Good story. Even the banana was a nice, if unexpected 'touch'. ;) It beats the hell out of some gang rape scene, which doesn't do a damn thing for me. And contrary to some other comments, not all guys would be shooting their mouths off about the experience, especially if they both liked and respected the girl, as was pretty obvious in the story. Assholes don't need to be done by assholes!
How about for the start,a banana split inserted and everyone eats it out.
Fantastic story. Great details. It's a shame that not a single one of the guys licked, sucked and tongue fucked her asshole until she came.
The group loved her first loving anal fuck. Now she should experience a DP at the next party, and a full gangbang in the future. She needs more than 3 guys...
I was hard as rock and almost shot the whole load before she was getting fucked in her cute asshole. Would love to hear how she handles 10", 12", and 14" cocks in a 10 boy gangbang of her asshole and her pussy. Bet her asshole wouldn't be so tight after being reamed and filled with all that cum. Then I bet her pussy would look and feel more like a cunt after her cervix and womb were pushed up into her uterus by 14" and 18" cocks along with a gallon of cum. She would have a helluva time even walking for a week afterwards. She would be such a cumbucket she would be cumming back everyday for an asshole and cunt recharge of that hot sticky slick white thick cum.
It is an interesting story concept and the use of a banana is unique, but the repetitive use of the same words over and over can make a good story stale. For example, I picked three words and "counted"... (CNTL + F)... 326 Julie's, 162 little's, and 150 asshole references making a grand total of 638 words in the story that are consisting of "Julie's little asshole". I could probably pick three more words and make it over 1000 words total. Don't take this criticism too harshly because as of today, I still haven't written a single story here, so you are much further ahead than me.
Skimmed. No dialogue in quotations. Not a fan of entire story written in description. Prefer lots of nasty dialogue after scene is described. My biggest pet peeve is when writer writes: and then he spewed of sentence after sentence of nasty abuse. Lazy. Have the character say all that abuse. So much hotter. Sorry probably doesn't apply here... It's 4:30 am... drunk rant. Should stop and not post this... but
Wow, that was HOT! Best thing I've read for quite a while. Please keep up the good work. 👍
great story. Clearly Julie needs to be cleaned out: perhaps she would enjoy a few large enemas, maybe while being fucked at the same time. Also having anal sex while filled with a large enema and losing control when she comes could be a fitting climax (pun intended) to her adventures.
Very erotic!! Being a slow reader it was a little drawn out for me but I can't take off stars for that. 5 stars
I will need to find a hot ass slut to practice methods of banana sex. I look forward to the challenge.