All Comments on 'Julie's New Orleans Adventure Ch. 01'

some writing talent and made an attempt to utilize dialogue to tell the story... however the key is using realistic dialogue and yours is anything but that. Concentrate on making it realistic and your writing will improve dramatically.

Title says it all. Piece of garbage. 90% of "Loving Wives" authors have no clue. This one doesn't either.

How and when does a Slut/whore wife become "reluctant"? in this story from the very start she is going for it full steam ahead, it doesn't matter if her cuckold wimp husband wanted her to fuck someone else she was going to do it regardless. But if you and your wife dream of such a thing then that is up to you. Good luck with your nightmare.

I wish my wife would get so into it that she just let herself go and enjoyed the feeling.

Does she call?

This was awesome. What a lucky wife to have a husband to let's her take on big cocks and be as slutty as she wants. And what a lucky husband to have such a hot and slutty wife who let's him watch!

Freakn get a life!!!!!

If the subject (in this case cuckolds) or any other subject, doesnt tickle your fancy or ring your bell, FFS go to another story genre!

Dirty hot slutty wife is good.

This is a site for erotica catering for a variety of tastes. Why idiots come on here and criticise a story for its content when the title says it all just beggars belief. Very well written. Hope to read more.

She will.

Thanks to all equally for the criticism and the compliments. Glad some enjoyed it and hope the others find something they like here....there is certainly something for everyone here!

Loved it and if I was Shane Id have licked her cunt clean after he was done fucking her like a whore. hmmmmmmmmm

the best story i have ever read,i did something similar to my wife(getting her ultra horny and letting her go wild in front of me)but was not as horny as yours sounds.great writing as well.would love to hear any more if there are some(if like us you will play more now)

Very good, thanks for taking the time to write and share with us ... and ignore the

people who don't understand and criticize couples who enjoy sharing their hot wives, it us their loss.

Please write more!

Immediately after reading this story my wife insisted upon having an orgasm. She said it was the best story I have ever sent her to read. Great job!!

1*

Gotta vote 5 then, must be a helluva cuck story if that closet cuckold read, spanked, commented and voted, holy shit!

You're no fucking better then the guy who voted "1" without reading it. You gave this story a "5" for spite. I did read it and I give it a "1" because I thought it sucked big time. At least I'm honest fuckhead.

Puke - 1 star

Anon probably thought the previous commenter was you; you do have a history of saying "I didn't read it but voted 1" so cut the kid some slack, lot of people going to think "didn't read but voted 1" is RH now, worse than DWornock....

wrong catagory. This should be in fetish because there is no love here.

Great story; those who don't like this fantasy or criticize the category should read In Loving Memory by toomuchinmyhead.

This 'writer'' is seriously sick ! Must have forgotten its meds. 1* .

wheres romeo?

Very well penned first story. Keep writing

As far as anonymous as concerned, why give such a scathing review hiding behind Anonymous? if it was possible for me to make a change to the website I would take away all anon votes. The writing in this story could be improved but was great for first story. This is a site dealing with eroticism. If you don't like this genre don't read it.

What is supposed to be sexy about a wife who is a whore.