by Robertshotwife
Stick this in interracial where it belongs. Let the darkies get their rocks off there.
Why don't we just have them move in and you move out! Happy Birthday!!
Just a small point. The cervix, the uteral openning is removed with the rest of the uterus with a hysterectomy.
Hell the fucked up comments are more entertaining then this story. What a bunch of whiners read on this site. And of course the black loving slut who wants us to believe she's a whore. You guys are a laugh a minute. Hahaha.
I really like your narrative but I'm a bigger fan of stories that include dialogue. You are very descriptive and the stories you write are good but I wish the dialogue had a bit more umph. The problem for me with first person narratives is that they can't truly express the thoughts and emotions of the other characters, for that you need good dialogue. Dialogue fills in the parts the narater can't as he or she cannot be in the mind or body of the other characters portrayed in the story. The strength in first person narrative is the insight they give into the observers emotional responses and thought process they give you a link to the emotional content of the story but they are difficult to write.
Bottom line... Great Work!
You can tell which guys have the puny dicks by the way they vote and rant. Jealous haters. If I had 4" I'd probably be bitter too. I don't have a foot, but I'm close and don't feel threatened by a guy that might be bigger.
The husband is generous and the wife sounds unbelievable. I would love to be part of a DP with that eager slut.
could be true u dumb butts, 9'' is my biggest have not wanted to go for these monsters but now i might try one just to see
Just under six inches is normal, 8 inches is huge, 10 inches is almost unheard of and 14 inches is considered a deformity.
I did not read much of your story, I just came in and voted what the title was worth, and to comment.
I wish all the fucktards that don't like hotwife stories would just keep their pieholes shut. Yeah, we already know you don't like them, so shut up already and move along. Don't read them, don't score them, and don't rant on about them!
Since this is fiction, you get to control the content. This was an interesting tale until about halfway through when it felt like you tried to retell the first penetration series. And then a third. As though you weren't happy with the first or second pass, I think you include too much fantasy in one fantasy. You obviously have a vivid and creative imagination. Try not to pour it all into a single story and you may find your results more satisfactory.