All Comments on 'Jungle Heat'

Please tell me this was just part one of a series!

I do hope it is a long journey and many adventures before they reach home.

The only thing that lets the tale down a little is the small mistakes which should be easily spotted if the old joiners maxim of 'measure three times, cut once' was employed.

example: "The man in front of Lukas, a bury half-orc" Now was he covered in Burrs or was he burly.

Ok it might seem like i am nit picking but your writing is so good that it would be a shame not to make it perfect.

Good short story and a fine beginning to a serial. I was drawn in quickly and swept through at a good pace. Do your own editing and beware of spellchecking by computer alone, as witness the first comment. Good luck!

I see someone's been reading wulf stories, great story though

I love this, I really really do.

I hope you make it into a series - say..how their own people react to the interracial coupling?

just wow