All Comments on 'Just a Bit'

The story brought back a lot of memories of my late teens, early twenties in Ontario's cottage country.

I hope there are sequels in the near future.

Don't stop, keep it going. They can get married and have children

Please - a "hymn" is something you sing in church. The word you're looking for is "hymen" - the membrane that partially obstructs the entrance to the vagina. It completely destroyed the mood to read "hymn" in the middle of a sexy scene. Beleive me, a hymnal is not anywhere a hot cock belongs. That mistake earned you a 3, which should have been a 2, but I gave credit for the effort.

short & sweet. Great narration!

More than a bit sweet...

Need an editor. Many misused words. Spelling. Distracts.

Fantastic story line very well written. One or 2 typo glitches which when corrected will make for easier reading. Loved the character descriptions.

I sincerely hope there is a follow up.

If you’re going to write a story that uses the hymen as a plot point, you should probably know where it is. Invest in an anatomy book.

Surrendering into a loving first time.

I hope you have more.

A very loving and tender first time to remember.

It needs a sequel and please make it a true love story. They can legally marry in a few states. The reason people read taboo stories is for the romance often seen in these stories. Author you have a really good one started. 5 stars so far. Make it a love story and not just another fuck story with stupid anal gay shit.

Barely average. The author needs to learn what and where the hymen is

It is unlikely that a girl weighing 120 pounds and five feet taller would be slender

The setting is unrealistic

- would you leave it to two kids to open up the summer place for a bunch of people? The author could have found some plausible way to get the characters alone together and then treated us to a fairly pedestrian account of two kids playing with fire and - no mention of birth control - maybe getting burned