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"I will always love you for this" he murmured.

"Now make love to me, really fuck me, fill me" Stella responded putting her arms around his neck.

James needed no further encouragement. He bent down, locked his lips with hers, and with one arm around her shoulders, and with one hand on her bum, started the last set of steps in the oldest dance in the world.

Because he had already shot a load earlier that evening James managed to last and bring Stella to another orgasm before with a final twenty truly deep strokes he too finished. Pushing in as deep as he could he emptied his balls far into this girl he had wanted so much for the last few years.

Stella could feel him squirt deep inside her, her cervix trying to dip into the sea of sperm. With her ankles across his buttocks she pulled him as close as possible, while her hips bucked under him in final encouragement. Mentally she crossed her fingers she was right about this being a safe time.

When they finally disengaged they fell asleep almost immediately, sleeping the sleep of lovers in each other's arms. When they woke up they did a careful repeat, because Stella was so sore, before showering and preparing for the rest of the family to show up

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OseekerOseeker8 days ago

First time fuck is always a memorable one.

Slow teasing with 'just the tip's & that never works out. Unloading into a girl's body is just so satisfying & you pray that she enjoyed it as much as you did.

4 stars

WittonWittonalmost 3 years ago

Barely average. The author needs to learn what and where the hymen is

It is unlikely that a girl weighing 120 pounds and five feet taller would be slender

The setting is unrealistic

- would you leave it to two kids to open up the summer place for a bunch of people? The author could have found some plausible way to get the characters alone together and then treated us to a fairly pedestrian account of two kids playing with fire and - no mention of birth control - maybe getting burned

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
A love story

It needs a sequel and please make it a true love story. They can legally marry in a few states. The reason people read taboo stories is for the romance often seen in these stories. Author you have a really good one started. 5 stars so far. Make it a love story and not just another fuck story with stupid anal gay shit.

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
What a beautiful start.

Surrendering into a loving first time.

I hope you have more.

A very loving and tender first time to remember.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Anatomy

If you’re going to write a story that uses the hymen as a plot point, you should probably know where it is. Invest in an anatomy book.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
The Inevitable

Fantastic story line very well written. One or 2 typo glitches which when corrected will make for easier reading. Loved the character descriptions.

I sincerely hope there is a follow up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Editor needed

Need an editor. Many misused words. Spelling. Distracts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

More than a bit sweet...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Some of the best are...

short & sweet. Great narration!

LitCritLitCritover 3 years ago
Please get an editor or proofreader before you post

Please - a "hymn" is something you sing in church. The word you're looking for is "hymen" - the membrane that partially obstructs the entrance to the vagina. It completely destroyed the mood to read "hymn" in the middle of a sexy scene. Beleive me, a hymnal is not anywhere a hot cock belongs. That mistake earned you a 3, which should have been a 2, but I gave credit for the effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep it going

Don't stop, keep it going. They can get married and have children

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