All Comments on 'Just a Crush'

keep it comin! maybe look into an editor though :)

I think it is really good. Please continue!

The story is developing well and you seemed to start flowing about halfway into it (the beginning came off a little choppy). However the biggest problem I had was your grammar. Even if you don't get an editor, just reread your story before you post it to try and catch simple mistakes.

Hope to see the next chapter soon though.

i think it's a good start, hope you continue it soon.

it was a very good start...

It was so hard to read because of all of your grammar mistakes.

A very nice beginning. I would definitely enjoy another chapter.Your story would benefit from editing, but I could understand what your meaning was. I liked the leaves at the beginning. Good start.

Thank you!

M1

My first language isn't English so i really did not notice the grammar mistakes :P I like your story so far it is definitely something I would follow if you submit more :)

Really? There were NOT a lot of mistakes and if there were a few minor ones....they were hardly noticeable, let alone make it 'hard to read' because of them. Some people and their comments are just stupid, plain and simple. Annnnnnnnnnyway....keep it up the good work. The storyline is great, the characters are great and the way you write is great. The story is moving at a good pace....not rushed, not lagging. Looking forward to more from you :)

but the number of grammar and phrasing errors eventually drove me away without finishing...and I usually love well regarded multi-part romance stories.

Please, see if you can attract an editor.