by sex4every1
I have enjoyed the story this far, lets have a little more action primarly with just the son. Perhaps a woman.
The first part of this story was one of the very best on the Lit!
I eagerly awaited the second part, anticipating the son's move to save time by depositing the cum where it could never be problem for the father, in her mouth, then in the next channel, in her ass and finally in her unprotected cunt!
But then from no where and for no reason that I could think of, a "friend" popped up in the story!!!
Bringing a third party in to a mom/son realationship seldom works.
If an intruder has to be introduced, it should obviously be AFTER the son has claimed all of his mother!
It could have been a great series with the son claiming more of his mom in each channel.
I am writing as anonymous as I can not remember my password :)
Besides, who on the Lit here is NOT anonymous, no matter what moniker is used???
Keep it between mom and son. and I think he should start fisting her pussy and ass
I agree with the comments about just keeping it in the family. i hate it when an author adds a secondary outside character for no reason. This story has an interesting premise, but it needs to stay between the two main characters for a while before friends are added.
...Just keep writing... whatever you want, it's been great so far... And write it however you want...
I loved the story and can't wait for more, however I also prefer the stories kept within the family.
it was only a matter of time before the facial...and mouth fucking... hope she licks his ass and starts getting that big cock up her ass...
Love the stores of you being the cum rag slut, keep them a cummming.
So, so naughty but absolutely enthralling, Depraved and sexy as hell LOL x 5 stars from me.
I can't wait for the next chapter. I think you need to get the husband involved eating her creampie and then becoming another cum dump for the son and his friends
You said that people should not use profanity in their comments but I don;t know how else to say this, This is so absolutely fucking hot and you are so tottaly fuckingly aaaawesomely sexy that if this is real then the whole world will be jelouse of your son. If it isn.t and he dosn;t exist the whole world will be appliying for the vacancy.
Never stop writing
Yours cumpleatly
Wizard
Is this a loving mother, or what? Her son Malcolm is a semen-producing machine, his hot young balls just keep on churning out that creamy sperm he's got to unload all the time. This is an excellent story by a gifted author in his 30s, and in Malcolm Mr. sex4every1 has created an icon for all actual or would-be motherfuckers. The brazen lad unloads his young balls all over the place, he wants his semen to be a constant presence--the one constant presence--in his mother's life. He's very deliberately making his mother "a willing slut, a mindless cunt," whose only purpose in life is "to give into – and encourage – every sexual urge and impulse my son could think of." There's no doubt that real soon Malcolm will fulfill the urge he's had in his mind all along, an urge shared by plenty of sons nowadays--to just shove his big hard cock up between his mother's legs, fuck the living shit out of her, and blow his balls up the same cunt he came out of. With all the twatfuls of semen the boy shoots up inside his mom, her twat will be brimming with her son's sperm, so that every time she sits down she'll make big sticky puddles all over the furniture. Malcolm likes the sight of those puddles, he likes it very much. They make him hard all over again, so he just goes and fucks his mother more. He fucks her whenever and wherever the spirit moves him--bending her over the kitchen counter, pushing her up against the wall, climbing on top of her in her bed, in the car, in the bathroom at the mall, on the lawn at night, wherever. For him his mother is just "a mindless cunt"--and his mom absolutely loves him for it. Malcolm's cock'll up his mother's twat more than it's just hanging down over his balls. This mother and son were made for each other.
The only thing keeping this from being a 5 star story is your lack of editing. Please proofread before you submit. I love the fact that you're as twisted as I am. Keep up the good work!
Mama told me not to cum , she said that ain’t the way to have fun son , that ain’t the way to have fun !
The moment the friend joined, this was ruined for me
It was very good until that moment
Shocked & angry that her son would let his friend cum on her, but too much of a slut to say no to him......or his friend. My perfect mom. A willing, submissive cum slut for her son
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Was good until another person was introduced. Then it just became like so many other shitty stories. And the condoms really? Was to kill the mood.
Liking the series, but I'm afraid I share the previous sentiments about sharing the mother with the friend. Other than that, very erotic story.
This is truly one of the hottest stories I've read here, and I am not sure how many times I've read it, it's just so hot!!
If you ever get to continue this one,
Or start another with the same theme,
I would be most grateful to you :-)