All Comments on 'Just a Dream...'

Another fine tale J.D.! Thanks for sharing it with us and give us a sequel when you find the time.

Makes me remember all those great times fucking my 9 cousins throughout my teen years, I loved getting my vagina pounded every night by someone different.... I miss it so much, but love all the sex I get from my teenage sons... Lifes great

I like the playfulness between the cousins. First no, then yes. Nicely done.

...our dreams can CUM true!

I miss your writing. You are a great storyteller and I hate your long periods of silence.

Excelent work as allways, can we gat a sequel?

The way you build up the story, the way you tell it, the soft and realistic conversations between the two and the cute way to replace I love you with "pretty please" just makes this easily one of my fav. stories. Keep writhing, you are good at it.

Can we plaese get a sequel?

Way too good to leave where it is. To be continued at the university maybe???

.. you missed one detail. All cars sold in the U.S. in the last 10 years or so are required to have a trunk release mechanism inside the trunk.

I agree with others that a sequel would be interesting.

You are simply an amazing storyteller! I wish you wrote more often. Gary13

This is a great story, the next chapter should be about what happens after he talks Grandma Ginny into letting his cousin come live with them. Now for the guy that says that you made a mistake because all cars sold in the states must have trunk release levers inside. Joe here first never said that the story was set in the US (many countries have national schools that are called State schools), second he never said what year the story was set in (how many drive-ins have you seen since the creation of the multiplex and the video store), and third he never said how old the car was (how many twenty-five year old county boys have you seen driving cars that are less then 10 years old, pickups maybe but not cars).

This is a fuckin masterpiece! I really hope you decide to do a sequel for this.

...I don't think 2 cousins can commit it; a brother & sister can but not cousins.

whether or not it's actual incest, several countries it's encouraged as it maintain the "purity of the bloodlines" others, as in the United States, it's against the law and is considered incest. Regardless of the incest question, it was a very good story, well written and not rambling and chaotic with insane "proportions"

You should write the sequel, it would be great to explore these characters. What happens when they get out of the trunk? Or maybe they find the trunk latch that opens it. Either way, great job!

I say: SEQUAL!

I loved the twist in the story where he didnt want to go on with it but eventually gave away and did what they both wanted too :-P

Too bad there wasnt a prequal, it would have made a great story but I can understand why you settled with a version like this. I'm just so darn curious about the things that were going to happen afterwards. srry for my bad English. Keep on writing great story's ;-)

that is one of the best stories i've read you have to write a second part

Original, I liked it!

Veary amazing story it truly deserves a sequal please

Sometimes a story reahes out and grabs you. This is one of them. Excellent!

no background on the characters no real plot no end just a jumble of nothing. trunks can be opened from inside or you can kick the rear seat in and access the passenger compartment and there is always the tire iron to pry the trunk lid open or dent the hell out of the car and attract attention. stupid and juvinile not worthy of being posted here.

One of the things I look for in these stories is some connection a reader (like myself) can make with the characters on a personal level. I only saw my cousins every once in a while during my childhood, and I always wanted to spend more time with them. This story is similar in that aspect.

Fun premise and an easy read. Tiny issue: the overabundance of exclamation points was distracting. Half the dialogue? Eeesh.

first cousins can legally marry so it's NOT incest blo

We had a drive in near us that showed adult movies. When were younger, we would find someone to take us and sneak in inside the trunk. A friend would borrow his dad's huge Lincoln and we could fit four in the trunk. One night it was just me and my girlfriend Cindy. I began groping her as soon as we were in the trunk. She let me slide her panties down and soon I was pumping away inside of her. My two friend up front had to tell us to knock it off as the car was bouncing as we pulled up to the ticket booth.

nice job. well done across the board...dialogue, pacing, hothothot!

I felt cramped too but it was great.

Cousin sex ain't incest. Just ask Poe, Darwin, Einstein, Giuliani, et al.

Fun if you suspend all reality. Cars have had glow-in-the-dark trunk release pull tabs in them for well over 20 years.

And the writing was too simplistic. Hi st a short fun read.

4 stars.

Bill S.

Good,good story.