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"Yes, yes, yes! I'm your bitch, all yours! Yesss I'm gonna cum!"
Pete leaned over him, gripping his balls, and took the head of his cock into his mouth. Dean cried out and arched, his body spasming as he shot a generous load into Pete's mouth. Pete stayed put until his body had calmed, and then let his softening cock slip out from between his lips, which he quickly sealed shut. He crawled up the bed and glared down at Dean for a few moments before abruptly spitting his cum all over his messy face.
Dean gasped and squeezed his eyes shut, breathing deeply. When they opened again, he was smiling widely. "End scene?" he whispered.
"End scene!" Pete agreed, breaking into a grin. His voice was edged with relief. He carefully took Dean's collar off and passed him an old towel to clean his face with. "Shit! Dean, was all that okay? I didn't hurt you too much?"
"No, oh man-Pete, that was better than I even hoped!" Dean exclaimed, reaching up to kiss Pete once he'd wiped his mouth. He beamed raptly. "You have no idea. It was incredible-absolutely epic!"
Pete settled next to him on the bed and cuddled up to his side. "I think I bruised your neck a little..."
"I don't mind! I mean, it hurt sometimes, but... I liked it! I really did!"
"You're such a freaky little weirdo!" Pete laughed. "Oh, shit... I can't believe I was such a bastard to you! I felt so bad, but it was also kinda... really hot! I guess we're both freaks."
"Consenting adults, Petey," Dean giggled, hugging him warmly. "We can be as freaky as we like." He kissed his cheek and nuzzled him. "Thanks for indulging me. And spitting my own stuff in my face? Didn't see that coming. That was a nice touch."
"I just followed my heart," Pete snickered. "Apparently my heart is pretty goddamn twisted."
"In all the right ways," Dean purred, stroking Pete's beard.
"I almost broke character when you started up crying. You're amazing!"
"I don't know why I enjoyed that so much," Dean sighed fondly. "Pete, this has been... easily the most fun I've ever had. Can we play again soon?"
"You promise you'll use the safeword if it gets too much?"
"Yes Pete, I swear. I used the hand signal, didn't I?"
"Yeah, that worked well. Sure, let's do it again." Pete grinned widely and kissed him passionately for a few minutes. "Okay. Now... let's go finish up that amazing dinner. Oh, fuck, it was so good! I love when you cook for me."
Dean giggled and pushed himself up into a sitting position. "Hold my hand on the way? I left my glasses in the kitchen."
"Better yet, I'll piggyback you!"
Dean laughed delightedly as he hopped up onto Pete's back. "Giddyup, horsey!"
"I am NOT playing THAT game!" Pete snorted.
"We'll see, Petey... we'll see." Dean grinned uncontrollably as he snugly gripped his ride back to the kitchen.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 days agoBecause of the segue from happy to grumpy I suspected some BDSM but was really shocked at the intensity. Not into BDSM myself, the thoughts growing in my mind were, dear God don’t let this change in writing style grow till someone gets hurt or worse. The human psyche can become very tricky.
Anonymous11 months agoI really enjoyed the first 3 chapters. I barely made it to the end of 4. Glad I did finish, but while I was always looking forward to the next chapter, I probably would not have read further. I'm just not a fan of BDSM. I'm more into romance and a mutual bonding and love making. The last chapter kind of ruined it or me. Had I have known there would have been such an abrupt change in this story, I wouldn't have even started it. I would, however, like to read more by you in the future. I think you are a talented writer. I do suggest, a brief heads up in the direction of the story. Thank you!
Anonymousover 2 years agoOkay at first this made me so mad but then I realized it was role playing. Thank goodness!! I loved these two! I love your writing style!
Laura1234over 2 years agoThe first time I read this, this was a hard chapter for me to read.
But this is an incredible series- so well done (especially the first three chapters!). Not that the last one wasn’t well done also but the first three were really amazing. I think knowing for real it was a scene and completely consensual made me much more relaxed for the last chapter!
A lot of us are not completely aware the the scene aspect so a little heads up could help, (for the unaware among us) but for those in the know all the signs and signals were there! (At least I saw them more the second time around so I assume so:)
Anonymousabout 3 years agoSeriously??? How is it that so many did not pay attention to the story while reading?! The majority of the comments were appalling to say the least. The "new game" descriptive should have been a start and then, throughout the 'scene' were more than enough... Never mind, some people just like to have something to complain about and berate an author rather than READ and PAY ATTENTION. The true disappointment is in the fact that so many comments served only to squelch the writer's future creative endeavors into the subject matter. Isn't life challenging enough having to concern one's self with shaming, especially on a site like this? You deserve better tamgreen, you really do.
eros991133over 3 years agoA warning about the level of BDSM in this chapter would have helped, but overall, a great series 👍🏽 And don't be discouraged by the negative comments (if you read or pay attention to them), you can't please everyone.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI recognize it’s your right to write your story and characters your own way, but I absolutely hated the direction you took this. The final chapter was not in any way hot - even between two consenting adults. The degree of cruelty, debasement, vulgarity, disrespect and violence was almost unreadable. It was like suffering through a domestic violence rape scene. It made me hate both characters for allowing such “play.” The fact that this chapter was so much darker and violent from the others - and there was no author warning or tagging - was beyond a shock. I can’t even articulate how much I was repulsed by this chapter. Sorry but you need to give a heads up if you choose to take such a dark turn (and no little hints like get a leash, or he smiled about the coke count as warnings!)
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoWhen chapter 3 ended with the guy saying he should get a collar I had a suspicion the next chapter who have kinks I don't like. This was the worst chapter ever. The previous chapters developed the relationship, and this one did nothing for them. I thought there was going to be some character development, or closure.
Anonymousover 4 years agoEnjoyed most of the game, but did not like the turn it took before the end. Degradation and physical violence a big turnoff for me.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI think you should really write what you want - with a heads up at the beginning to warn people of any violence or bdsm,especially when it starts off so light hearted! I caught the hint that he was in a good mood and had to pretend to be in a bad mood when coming home, but still I was a bit concerned and ended up skimming the violence to see with relief at the end that they were going to end the scene. Part of what worried me is that I wondered if there (*their) relationship had devolved into this full time. But as a temporary scene I wouldn’t use the word devolved , maybe better to say evolved :) .... it was just a bit on the degrading side for me (which shouldn’t affect at all what you want to or actually do write). And I do get off on bdsm depending on the circumstances :).
I did enjoy the spelling corrections during sexting!!! 😂
