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by XXNoraJeanXX

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fun in the park

That was a delightful little story thank you :-)

johnb110johnb110over 10 years ago
Good story

Short but sweet.

zexysoftsubzexysoftsubabout 10 years ago
the wetter the better

very sexy hot little short story... kinda like me

DaddysGoldenGirlDaddysGoldenGirlover 9 years ago
Oh my!

How very sexy! I love it! I had visions of it being me and my daddy :) Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
POV issues.

The mix of first and second person does not go together at all. Other than that, this is good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Again POV just write it as it's happening to you

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