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"We just got back from a sales convention in Las Vegas." She quickly said, pulling out the airline tickets and hotel receipt. "Here are all of our receipts; you'll see we just landed a few minutes ago."
The officer looked over the papers and handed them back to Tina. "Well, Ma'am you don't want to go in there. It's very bad and not a pretty sight." He said adding, "If you want, try and write out a list of all the things you want and where they will be and bring it to the police station in the morning and I'll see that you get them."
"Okay." Was all Tina could say. She helped Harry back in the car and drove to his house.
Harry reached to caress her thigh and asked, "Are you okay?" he asked his lover.
"Yes!" she said with joy. "My ass hole husband is dead and he had a five hundred thousand dollar life insurance policy." She laughed out as she drove up to Harry's house. "Let's go inside. Now I'm yours forever!" she giggled as she hugged Harry to her heaving breasts.
THE END.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoHahaha!! I actually gave it a 5+++ just for the awesome ending, hehehe!! ;). That was hilarious! Wonder if they'll find his teeny weenier up his ass or in his mouth!
My only suggestion would be to stop using lie and lies and use lay.
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Oh, and this clip...
"Harry, I stopped taking my birth control pills last month." She said not knowing what his reaction would be
Harry lie under her, he could feel her breathing increase and her body tense up. He heard her words and his big heart filled with joy. "Oh baby! I love you!"
I'm thinking his response would have been more along the lines of... "Son of a bitch!! I knew you were too good to be true! I thought you were a nice, normal horny, kinky nymphomaniac that I could settle down with. But noooo, I've had to get a man trapper,mtrying to lock me in and tie me down for the next twenty years without you even have moved in yet! I've got me a nut job! Do I look like I want to change diapers for a few years?! My sense of smell is like five times better than yours, do you know what a shitty baby ass does to a nose like that? It's like me stabbing a puppy and making you watch! Ugh! And my well laid out house? Gone. Baby toys, blocks, balls, and other things I cant imagine layibg all over, every day for me to trip or step on! Oh. Hell. No. I bet you call every thirty minutes when I'm out of line of sight checking up on me too, eh? You know what? Lets just buy the house next door and you can live there with the kids and just come visit every day. Yeah. Thats it! Women...
Anonymousabout 10 years agoWell, ch.2 is about as bad as ch1. We are given a small vingette into the life of Daddy and Tina earlier, but not told whatever happened to him. They are sent to a sales convention, but never leave their room? He came 50 times in 4 days? Thats more than ten times in a 24hr period for 4 days/nights straight and he is 45yrs old. This story is, of course, fiction. But it is not even believable fiction. Hubby has his penis cut off at the end? Earlier it was told that he wouldn't support his family and that Tina was the primary breadwinner, but then the end of the story tells us that Brad has a half million life insurance policy? Come on! You should really try to do better than this. This is a really sad story and has almost nothing to do with Incest and without a strong incest theme the rest of the story contains little that could be considered taboo. Fetish, maybe, with Harry being blind, older, and a lot of anal play - but nothing too uncommon. I myself am disabled and would like to be able to read some good erotic stories (fiction or nonfiction) involving individuals with various forms of challenges but this is not one of them. I do know now that I do not want to read anymore of your work, though the list of your works looks interesting in theme - your composition sucks.
Anonymousover 10 years agobut the way you wrote it was they never left the bedroom - surely they would have had to go to meetings or seminars and then you say he came 50 times....now that is pure make belief - if he was 20 yes but not at his age....so glad her jerk of an husband got what he deserved but who did it....would suggest she did it before going away especially with the high insurance policy on him - but there again could have been someone getting him back for screwing another woman - we will never know but now they get to live together and they can start making babies....perhaps needed an extra page about them going back to the office and their new roles and then telling everyone they were getting married etc etc....nice story....loved this bit.....
Anonymousover 13 years agoFinally a story where a very deserving asshole gets exactly what's coming to him and the happy couple get to reap the rewards. HOT!!
