All Comments on 'Just a Peek'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012about 5 years ago
not bad

it seems the teacher became the student, this was pretty good a little short but still good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Part II

How soon for part 2 when they have full contact and teach participates ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Too Short

It's well written but way too short. I hope you continue the story to their second meeting but please give more character develpoment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Really good, love the concept. Please make the next one longer! :)

InvaderElf94InvaderElf94about 5 years ago
Had me hooked.

Would really like to explore this relationship with the teacher and student..

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Writing style could be better, it's so short... But so hot!

kboneonekboneoneover 1 year ago

This is a GREAT STORY, even though it was short

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