All Comments on 'Just Another Day at the Office'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Love your story Gator!!!!

Let me know anytime you need help with a spreadsheet!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good premise.

Sex all to rapid. All too automatic.

Nothing with her breasts and nipples?

Nothing with her ass? He doesn't tease her asshole with his fingers or his tongue.

You wrote YOU multiple times when you meant YOUR.

Four stars.

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