All Comments on 'Just Another Tavern Wench'

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I think it was great. You paint pictures with your words... So I am there in the story. It was creative, fast paced and very vivid. I enjoyed it.

Thank you for sharing💕

Well constructed story.

Definitely neutral evil.

Well written. It felt like I was right there in the story!! And who wouldn't want to be?? :D Amazing story line that really drew me in. Honestly you did a great job of painting the scene with your words as I was able to envision it down to the closet they are in. Will be watching for more stories!

Distasteful asshole wanders into a bar, eats. forces sex on a bar maid, and leaves. Very absorbing plot.

So fucking HOT