All Comments on 'Just Ask Ch. 05'

I'm with Anonymous, that line is geil. Hayden is my new favorite.

"Fuck you big fucking jocks, I'm here and queer as fuck and just as fucking tall." Hayden is a great character. Jackson is great and totally adorable, but Hayden is so alive and so unbelievably hot. I am in love. You have got to keep writing. Please don't switch totally to Jackson's POV (a little is sweet). "Then I'll do both." What a charmer! I love that he is tough and ballsy and queer.

I agree, where has it been hiding? And what is with the low votes? This is up there with Chickadee and Speech & Debate. Well done! Keep writing, please.

That was fire! I can't believe it took me so long to find this story. Please don't stop writing.

Another amazing series on Lit. Just please finish it! So many good ones are left unfinished. I love your writing. KUTGW!

PLEASE don't go another year before writing more. Great story, terrific character development. Love it. Thanks!!!!!

I just wish I was Jackson.

Just discovered your story today, don't know how I missed this gem. Very good character development, love the evolving love story(the sex is sure hot) between the two boys. Masterful use of language; the emotion and lust jumped off the page. Would make a great script for a class A erotic movie. I'd certainly watch!!! Like the longer chapter, just don't want to wait too long for an update