All Comments on 'Just Before Dawn'

Just can't see any appeal to this at all.....

Part of it was good, but she ate her own shit? That's just nasty, I almost threw up. There was no appeal to this. Don't continue. Sorry.

I'd love to be in the narrator's place. My cunt soaked thru my panties while reading it. A big rush, thank you.

Just....... no

How dumb do you figure some of these commenters are? So they don't like it and that means you should stop writing? And what about those who enjoy it? They should be deprived because it doesn't appeal to others? Selfish thinking. Please keep writing! The navel gazers who don't like it are under no obligation to read your stories.

Vivid explicit. Yet I'm dumbfounded because you didn't reveal more depth of the main characters. Wish you would have went deeper into the victims life, too explain her weakness for her person.

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