All Comments on 'Just For Once'

Tender, loving, and sexy. Please give us more.

Please!!!!!

The pace was quick, without feeling rushed; deliberate, tactful, and sexy. Elements were beautiful and the focus on her progression from reserve to consumed was excellent. Extensive use of commas-making for uncomfortably long sentences and disjointed splicings-affected readibility a bit.

This story would be well served by drawing out some of the remarkable building scences just by breaking them into paragraphs. Give the reader a bit more time to breathe between caresses, time to really be absorbed.

Overall, great stuff here, a pleasure to read for sure!

You have proven that it does not take exotic techniques or multiple partners (although I like those too) to be hot. This was marvelously written and so entertaining to read.

“She had beautiful breath...” After a cigarette? Yuck.