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hindsight2020hindsight2020about 2 months ago

The poor use of dialect detracts from an already weak story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I liked it. I can see what you are trying to do with the colloquial dialect. Why follow the rules! That’s why I fell asleep during all my classes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Dialect made it UNreadable! Try again, pig Latin would be an improvement.

TheNightPorterTheNightPorterabout 2 months agoAuthor

Hallo. Greeting everybody. Please know I am fixing this story to make the dialect clearer. Please return to it in a few days until the changes take place. Sorry this is so dense! Thanks for by our patience. -TheNightPorter

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