All Comments on 'Just Friends'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Don't know what to think, but enjoyed it immensely!

Very different, but very nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Please write a sequel. I've been checking every day to see if we finally see Nathan and Aaron together.

FamejerkiesFamejerkiesover 5 years agoAuthor
Sequel

I didn't have any ideas on what to do for a sequel, but your comment inspired some... a sequel of the night from Nathan's POV leading to him and Aaron being together would be excellent. I'll get onto it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Great read I really enjoyed this. Tapped into some primal stuff for me, the relationship between Ethan and Aaron was really well described and I loved where it ended up. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The cheating seemed very unnecessary. Why give Aaron a girlfriend at all if she's to play no part but give Aaron another reason to be hesitant? The hesitation to have sex with your male friend would have been sufficient, or perhaps just making Aaron more of a square and unwilling to participate because of that. The cheating seems like an easy cop out to add Aaron's hesitation but ultimately just makes his position sad.

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