by Ann Douglas
All of your stories are great but the length, pacing and the imaginative scenes (and well formed ;) ) characters, were particularly evocative. Thank you!
You are a truly gifted writer. Thank you for sharing your talent and imagination.
very good build-up you never can tell when a bad day can turn in one of your best days
You really have a unique ability to get characters to feel really realistic, with real emotions. With real love and lives. I just want to say from a fellow novel writer; you have an amazing gift of showing emotions in your stories and I think you should write a short story or maybe even try a full book and get it published (that's what I've been doing) that is similar to this story, with an actress and a drugstore worker slowly and progressively falling for each other.
It's great that all your stories r fresh and very believable. The emotions between characters and the build up to the sex is great. Just perfect.
Wow, another fantastic story Ann, thank you so very much for sharing these with us!
About as much chance of this happening as winning the lottery. But it was hot.
The most delicious story! The sex was so hot I am still fondling myself!
All the best,
Kathy
A fun story. Not subtle or complicated but sweetly done, with the sex nicely handled.
What a beautiful Sapphic Cinderella story. I loved it. Your use of description allowed me to visualize the two characters as they moved through the erotic sequence. Beautiful. Thank you.