by My Erotic Trail
Hi,
I read all of your poems and loved them- this is nice to see a story from you, also. Very moving and heart-felt.
Why is it that I could never find a poetry class like that back in school?
R. Richard
...on trying something a bit different. Thanks for giving us an interesting, enjoyable read.
Rumple
Very erotic piece! Makes me wish that I had learned poetry in such a way. It was lovely, and good luck to you.
of prose and poetry. I liked the story, but I think you were a bit sloppy. Shame on you, as the shifting tenses mar a lovely Valentine addition. ;)
Good luck.
Black Tulip
of prose and poetry. I never had an English tutor but if I had, I would have wanted one like Rose.
The words flow, neither prose nor poetry, but a delicious mix of the two. I enjoyed this. :)
very panty wetting. A great tale that brings the beautifully flowing prose of the great poets with the sexual sensuality of pure erotica. Very Hot.
Mmmmm Art you are a true erotica writer. Such beautiful visions. Thank you for the beauty you pen!
L~