All Comments on ''Just' Jane Ch. 02'

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ender2k2kender2k2kover 6 years ago
Really interesting characters

It is good to be reading a new story from you. Thanks

AahhWhattheHellAahhWhattheHellover 2 years ago

Wonderful buildup. Tease, tease, back down, twinge of jealousy, major tease... Finally! plot thickens and end. Well played. Very well played.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The complexity of this story continues to amaze me, and yet it is so well written you don't even notice. Everything is so subtle, but underneath you continue to get drawn in deeper. What an amazing story so far.

SynjarMcabeSynjarMcabeover 1 year ago

After reading your prelude I didn’t want to read your stories. You sounded like you were passing the buck

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