All Comments on ''Just' Jane'

There is a lot of mystery here. The casual, familial incest is strange and exciting. The Corporate Dom/sub hierarchy is cold, alien, and intriguing. Trying to picture the science fiction office with lucite tables and a swimming pool down the center. It's bizarre. Poole is not a likable character, so far. Too intimidating, demanding and iconic. We haven't even met David or Amanda yet!

This is the best story I've read from you so far! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Cuz I don't kno where this is going yet, but I'm hoping ! ! !

The depth of the characters are so clear I can almost see them. It covers years, but it is so seamless, you barely notice. Who is this Poole? What did David do? There is something intriguing about this story. The author is masterful in peeling back the layers of the onion, you can't wait to read the next line.