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Click hereFor all outward appearances, everything was going well. She was promoted to head up the surgical nurses unit. There were the occasional dates and one offs to scratch the itch but when she was home by herself, it wasn't solitude but loneliness that scarred her demeanor.
It wasn't until she received the package on her step about the time Rick was appointed to his post in Miami that she fully realized just how mistaken she had been about her loving husband. She mistook him for a man who could be cuckolded, who would accept her brand of love and be purchased with the cheap flesh of a neighbor. Now she knew the price of a pound of flesh.
It was a small package in a brown wrapper, heavy for its size. Marcy Weston unwrapped it in the living room with the fireplace behind her and found a jar and set it on the coffee table. So much for brain surgery.
Inside the jar were two severed thumbs, pickled and preserved.
MFH
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 days agoWhoa! No “Two Thumbs Up” for this one, MFH.
We saw how that worked out.👀. Seriously though, I liked it. Sometimes revenge can be an ugly thing. But if you want it you better be ready to own it. Looked like Rick did.
5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
timrivabout 1 month agoDid not like the ending. Sure beat the shit out of Trey to cut off his thumbs was way over the top. Without his ability to operate means dozens maybe hundreds of people in third world countries will die because of his inability to operate. Not fair since Marcy was left with no penalty but a divorce that didn’t stop her living her life. Marcy should have been punished at least as bad as her lover or Trey should have not been punished any worse than tMarcy was.
oldpantythiefabout 2 months agoYou know that if Trey knew some good surgeon buddies they could graft two of his toes to replace the missing thumbs.... LOL! Still might not want him doing brain surgery on me or my friends though. I did think that March got off a little too easy, at least compared to the good Doctor. Still as good an ending as most I've read so far.
RePhil3 months agoI bet you’re singing that song now hahaha probably all day long. Have a great one my friend. And remember prophetic words, by me. “Reality is a singularity solely owned and seldom shared and never understood by others
RePhil3 months agoAnd the beat goes on! Pounding rhythms to the brain!! Good one! Always top drawer writing.
Anonymous3 months agoWorks for me. A very nice ending to that other story that didn’t have one. Thanks, MFH, I needed that. 5 stars
Anonymous6 months agoNo man gets drunk and goes on a multi day bender, that's something weaklings and teenagers do.
It's a shame how cucks always get 'muscle cars' to make up for their inadequacies.
Just as it's a shame that military personnel are always being shown as cucks, I'm sure many are but they're also just as likely to have used prostitutes and more.
In a 50/50 no fault state, divorce cannot be stopped only delayed and really who cares about a few extra months.
Killing someone, or even just cutting off their thumbs is just a recognition of your own inadequacies and failure to provide your wife with the necessaries.
Totally understood why she'd have an affair, as many of these stories go, he broke the marriage by having an affair so all bets were off. You can't break a broken plate.
Still can't quite understand why anyone would think that their partner wouldn't want a divorce after you'd gone away for 6 weeks with a lover. Can't say I liked the original much either.
AllNigher8 months agoThe thumbs ruined it for be. Great up to that.
Not sure the gate for the military discussion.... It was integral to the original story and him going back to his career made sense. What about ask the doctor and lawyer'crap' in other stories?
As for morally superior... I agree he cheated and shouldn't pretend he didn't. That said, a one time slip as bad as it is does not equate to a6week tryst in his face. They both sucked a bit but she was alot worse to me. That said, yeh ... was he honest with his kids about what he did I wonder?
Anonymous9 months agoNo. It was just once, against his just once. Why should he feel morally superior? Too much military crap.
