All Comments on 'Just One Kiss'

"Just One Kiss" is a helluva good story. It took a lot of imagination to do that story!

Thank you for sharing that with us!

Keep up the good work!

Great, patient story of sisterly love. Especially loved the tenderness. Taking a virgin sister, it was important that it should be special. Very nice.

This story was amazing. Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

LOVED the story... the warmth and affection of the sisters for one another was beautifully captured, making the steamy parts all the more enjoyable. One request: I'd love to see another installment or two to this story, especially since the younger sister hasn't had the opportunity to respond in kind to her big sister's lovemaking. Be that as it may, this was quite a delicious read... keep up the good work!

THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ AT THIS SITE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND HOPE TO READ A PART 2 OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT

You are Good!

I just read a few of your stories and they are really great.

They make me wonder if they are real... Can there be a better compliment?

Regards,

Other than that a good story

that was a great story.i think you should do another installment but otherwise keep up the good work!

dripping wet with excitement....that was hot, I'd love to teach my sister how to kiss and eat her out....and massaging her pussy with a toy....would mean so much to me, I'm going to have to cum....so erotic.

thank you for that hot story!!!

That was so fuckin' HOT! Loved the sis on sis action! Great job!

awsome.. nothing to say but keep up the good work and please make part 2

I was not sure exactly how I felt about this topic, but this was done very well. Tasteful, very sexy and not uncomfortable for the reader.

Wow, actual literature... Great writing, I will read more of yours.

One of my favourite stories, and through much of the poorly written pornography that is on this site, I'm glad that this has shined through! You have captured love in this story, and have attained my readership.

What a wonderful story. Nothing pornographic, but the story came alive with the two sisters sharing love and tenderness. I tingled all the way through and to say I was extremely wet is an understatement. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I hope the writer creates a lot more.

What a well-written story. Never had a sister, but I hope my daughters explored their sexuality in that loving way. I also wish I could ask what they teach their daughters.

If you would study the use of apostrophes (say, in Strunk and White) you would scarcely need a proof-reader.

Part 2, please!

My ex-girlfriend had a younger sister who was so hot. The age difference between them was the same, and the descriptions of them are very alike. Author, you don't happen to be writing about the same two sisters? I always fantasized about the two of them just like this. This story is incredible!!!

It was the perfect first time

I don't usually comment on stories, but this was really well written. Thanks!

i really enjoyed reading your story and my only disappointment was it ending i wanted more :)

This was kinda cute ^\\\^

Great story. I hope you write more of these sisters. I love Kelly teaching Pam. Maybe the other hole in the next story. ;)

Beautiful story, well done! So much warmth.

Domald

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