All Comments on 'Just One Kiss'

Oldie but goodie!

This is very erotic - you have the best storylines.

Gosh, I wish I'd found your stories when I first came on Lit - tho I may not have written after reading your words. You're fabulous! Thanks for a lovely, romantic & hot story!

Stacy

By about the 2nd paragraph I was already hoping for a happy ending. I'm impressed that there was not only erotic sexytimes between them, but an emotional arc as well. Kudos for being able to combine the two.

I love them too

I love your stories. Please, keep writing.

Oh! I wish I was with my sould mate like that. 25 years and we have only kissed! May be ...one day ...

Awesome job with the story. Would like another chapter to see if their relationship changes

I haven't visited this site in years and the first story I read was this one. Bravo! Great Job. I really enjoyed it and would definitely like to read more on these two.

I hope these two build on something so beautiful, and erotic at the same time.

This was a very well written story! =D I loved how playful it was one minute and then the next completely erotic. I loved it. Also, if it ever comes about, I would love to read more about these two.

Sensational story. Could feel the mood as I read it. Another chapter perhaps!

Thanks, SproutingWallflower. That's kind of you to say! I had a lot of fun writing this one. :)

I have never been so moved by a story to the point of commenting. You nailed it! I could picture it, feel it, the passion was unstoppable and you articulated that beautifully!