by Fish_Tales
Have some mercy though, will he ever get to actually fuck her? plus the last one hinted that the daughter ws doing her father. Can we see some of that? This is great!
Those internal " this is the last time" rationalization
dialogues are disconcerting because I hear the same words trying to buy time on my own 'bad habits of choice. I'll give you five stars but you gotta pride to Get OUT of my head!
seeing your sense of humor coming though on these chapters. As usual, you've written a wonderful blow job scene. If you combine that with the witty double entendre, you have a 5 start story.
Continue some more parts with more secretive suckings.. Please..
I love it.. Reflects my exact themes..mmmm