All Comments on 'Just One Night'

I've enjoyed some of your previous writings and this was no exception. Well written and fun to read. Thanks for the effort.

Okay unless I was reading too fast, I didn't see the ages of your characters. If it was intentional, then I can understand, but as an audience member, I don't like being left hanging.

The Freedom convoy is the best thing to happen in this country in years, certainly since the little rich twat from Montreal. Apart from that dig, a good story.

I really enjoyed your story, it went at the right pace and not full of grammatical and spelling errors like some. Ki will be looking for more that you have written.

Nicely done, sweet and lovely!

THANK YOU!!!!!

Nice and sweet tale. I usually don't like switching POV mid-story several times, but it worked okay here. Thanks for sharing, smutty!

Enough to give you the warm fuzzies!

5***** again

Great story but please give it a read next time before publishing! I read you regularly and a few mistakes no big deal but this one really looks like you pushed. Good enough story though to rate a 5.

Cheers

SAGE

Beautiful writing and almost perfect editing. That’s a rare combination on this site. Thanks for a delightful story, one told without profanity and disgusting, smutty detail.

Lovely sweet story. Loved it

I read this very enjoyable tale last night but was too tired when I finished to comment or vote at the time. Rectifying that now.

Nikki seemed like a little firecracker in need so I was happy for her and for Chase as the story unfolded and they found each other and what they wanted. I nodded when she eavesdropped, and nodded even more with a smile when the truth was revealed to be very close to what I expected. The constraints of the challenge were obvious in a couple of places where it might have felt a little more natural to take things offsite and to slow down a bit, but it was handled quite well in both cases. I liked that we find out in the end that Nikki wasn't the only one in need; they were both at that point in their lives where they needed and were ready for each other, making the end a real and very happy surprise. Great job, 5*.

Wonderful

Wonderful! Thank you!

Great writing, loved the romantic story and the love making.

Well, HR is gonna shit a brick!

A lovely, romantic story right in my wheelhouse. There are so few older man/younger woman stories posted in MATURE. Just endless MILF this and MILF that.

I do, however, hate it when a writer forgets what he’s written. You establish that Chase’s office has no windows. Later he awakens and assumes it’s not day yet because it’s dark. Of course it’s dark! There are no windows!