All Comments on 'Just the Helper I was Looking For'

Slow build that I like. Good story. Keep on writing.

Good premise.

Slowish buildup.

But lacks details. Needed much more time, and many more details of their foreplay.

Needed her telling him she didn't shave her pussy. Did he like it hairy? Would he like it if she shaved it?

Needed dialog wth him asking her if she liked what he was doing? Did she want more? What, specifically?

Needed her telling him what she wanted him to do to/with her body. Needed more breast involvement.

Needed her handling/playing with his cock -- perhaps so he wouldn't push it into her pussy.

Needed more head of cock rubbing her clit; maybe by her.

Four stars.

Please continue. What a dream come true.

Beautiful story, perfectly scripted. I hope you write some more soon as you have a talent I think