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All Comments on 'Just Wanna Be the Girl You Like Pt. 01'

by Degausser

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redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

I would told they new boyfriend that she was the ex then left

blahhead818blahhead818over 9 years ago
Good start

I like it, Hayley is a bit of a bitch but I'm sure she'll get better in the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
love it so far

Love the story so far please post more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love love love it

This is fabulous. I found myself getting extremely aroused. I hope there is more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Welcome back

I love these characters! They are very real and complex. I hope very much you stay with us and continue to write about them. I feel there is a lot more to know about both Hayley and Daisy. Please make it a long story!

elusiouselusiousover 9 years ago

I really enjoyed the characters, storyline and your writing style. :) I'm looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

don't stop

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I really like it and how the characters are. I hope you make more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Great read! More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
next part please!

Loved the characters and build up! Eagerly waiting for the next part!

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Why the username? I love the song Degausser by Brand New. I enjoy writing, especially stories that have complex relationship dynamics. I'm incredibly thankful for anyone who takes the time to read them so thank you if you're reading my profile.