by CoventinaNyx
I never thought a rapist could have my sympathy. You made it possible.
This is the second of your stories I read.
The first one – "The first time" - was a favorite story; now you are a favorite author.
I love to read you!
Funniest thing ever when she said he rammed her into a coma...loved it and yes im sure he's quite proud
You've pulled this right from my deepest dreams and fantasies. Thank you. I'm looking forward to reading more and more and more please. Excellent story.
Congratulations on writing a great story in second person. That's hard to do well. I hope you post more.
That's what I was going for, allowing the reader to be in the story.
I am working fleshing out both of the main characters in this story. I have some very specific ideas for both of them. Thanks for the input and encouragement, it's very appreciated.
I'd like to know more about our victim, the usual who, what, when, where, how... You set up a fantasy scenario, so if you continue, it'd be interesting to see how it plays into and affects her regular day-to-day life. It's a great start so far...
I do plan a series for this, I just havent decided which direction I want to go yet. Suggestions are always welcome!