All Comments on 'Justice Ch. 03: Lawyers, Guns & Money'

hey do more about about justice .a peace give you 5 stars

i enjoy reading these. i do hope you continue.

Do the manuscript story!

Keep up the great work! Too bad about Cheryl's death. It might have been fun to have her completely reformed and devoted to her husband.

Very good again. I really like your stories, there not just wham, bam, thank you mam. Looking forward to more.

Thanks. Yes, I would love to read Cheryl's manuscript.

Please just stop

Stellar bit of writing once again.

While I love wriing stories about women like Cheryl, I beleive she is youyr character and only you would do her justice.

It would make a great addition to this story set.

Very entertaining! I really enjoyed your story!

in the 39th Indiana Infantry which became the 39th Indiana Mounted Infantry after they bought horses and Spencer repeating rifles and then became the 8th Indiana Calvary! His colonel was Fielder Alsop Jones.

A follow up would definitely be appreciated. This is a great storyline.

Please keep them coming! 🌟🌟🌟🌟

Another great story from this gifted writer, awsome

Thank you I love this series. Please continue I don't care if other people put you down or treat your writings like they're no good, but they are extremely well-written I just think some people are jealous. I would love to see this series continued indefinitely. Thank you and that's it.

I always leave saddletramp's stories with the strong impression that they were written by a sixteen year-old gamer. Full of demon kings and magic tricks and cheating women who after years of brilliance suddenly become as dumb as rocks. Completely simple-minded but as entertaining as a children's pantomime. This one was a classic.

would be interesting.

Loved it. Some people just don't like fantasy. Keep it coming.

I'd like to read Cheryl's story, but if she was to live, I'd prefer it to be as Lionel's sex slave.

Very minor point, but why bother with the counting once the car drives off?

Okay, I know this is "just a story," and we need "black hats" and "white hats," but there's naive, and there's STUPIDLY naive. While she's certainly entitled to send some of "her" money on a nice car for herself, she's NOT entitled to not pay her share of the bills. And company "business" cruises that don't include spouses? There should be some explanation of why he's so whipped.

"He knew he would get screwed in court no matter what." - No fault divorce cuts both ways. He doesn't need proof, and as the higher earner, she'd owe HIM alimony!

"In hindsight, he realized he should've been more proactive." - No shit, Sherlock! Why do they always need to learn "more?"

"That we saw video of two people somewhere - we don't know where - discussing a revolution before having sex? They'll lock us both up in a looney bin somewhere." - Not that they SAW a video, but they HAVE a video. Heck, send a copy anonymously.

I am beginning to become a fan of your unusual western stories, your stories are somewhat science fiction but have a strong western theme. I would encourage you to write about the manuscript you metioned but in another genre on this site. Keep up your excellent story telling, I always love good western novel.

Yes her manuscript would be interesting

5 Stars ****

yehudi

This is a great fantasy. I have enjoyed the whole series so far. Looking for more of Justice O Peace. Thanks

Well Done!

What an interesting story. I would sure like a continuation of the 'Justice' series and a follow up to this story.

Thank you for ANOTHER great story.

Out of interest, when my first (and so far only) great grandson was born, he had a great, great, great grandmother still alive. My wife’s family came from very rural Leicestershire and I understand there were a couple of ‘early’ pregnancies involved. Not that we, my daughter or her daughter exactly waited around as it were.

But I love it. Sorry, it might never happen in reality. But fantasy sometimes takes your mind off everything going on around you.

Once you mentionned it in the story, I thought it was missing...

If this is ever written, despite your offer, it can only be written by you Sir. Only Saddletramp can write a Saddletramp story!

Thank you so very much for the hours of entertainment you provide for us. please don't stop.

Greetings from the UK, and all good wishes to you and yours in these chaotic times.

James

I would enjoy reading a story about her fall and her redemption as long as it's not a retelling. I can see that her story is separate enough from his that there should be little repetition. My greatest curiosity is about her time spent chained to the rock and what led her to true repentance. Following that is my interest in her inability to readjust to society, ultimately leading to her suicide. Her seduction by money, power, and an alpha male is far less interesting to me. I think she explained it succinctly in this story.

Yet again another fantastic from you I really do enjoy your stories. I’m starting to really enjoy your justice series they seem to quite fun . But what makes me proud of you is the fact that you do so much research on your stories and how you let your imagination have fun writing these stories. I just wish these other pop up writers would take a few minutes and do like you do to get such a fantastic stories. They seem to just keep writing utter garbage cuckold stories and just keep dumping them into the loving wife category. What makes it worse is that nearly all of these so called cuckold stories don’t belong in the loving wife category. So the loving wife category just gets flooded with poor stories. That is why I’m so proud of you when you write fantastic stories like this it’s like today there wasn’t just you that wrote fantastic stories. So thank you for sharing your stories with me and others and please keep writing these fantastic stories. But most of all please look after yourself over there . Because I want tons more stories from you do you understand me I want more of these fantastic stories. Lol 😂

By all means her manuscript.

I, for one, am not interested in Cheryl's manuscript. We already know what kind of person she is and we know how it will end.

I like your style.....very well done and look forward to reading more in this series.

Already heard from quite a few readers, I have decided to post Cheryl's transcript. Look for it in about 3 weeks under the title, "Cheryl's Lament."

They may not contain any sex and that’s fine. I can’t explain it I just really like them.

Just keep doing them.

Another interesting meeting of the old west & modern times. These stories are interesting and have a unique hook to them. It's a nice change from basic BTB, to be honest.

Also, I'd definitely ne interested in Cheryl's manuscript.

Better for such silly stuff that makes its own rules as it goes along.

I knew within two paragraphs that Cheryl was going to be in big trouble, and I wasn't disappointed. Another great Justice story, with a guest appearance by Gen. JEB Stuart of the Calvary of the Army of Northern Virginia. Your usual engrossing story took me away from a good History documentary on the Battle of Okinawa. I don't care how unrealistic they are, I love them. Reading Cheryl's manuscript would be great. Burns would more Justice stories. He would be a hornet the Camp. Thanks saddletramp, this was much appreciated.

I haven't seen this idea in many of the yarns that I have read.

A small point to make you do realise that the rest of the world is reading your missives and the Texas meaning of drug is not in any dictionary. I think for the sake of clarity could you use drag instead please.

Cheers and keep up the good work.

John Child.

yes a story on Cheryl's manuscript, I like these stories

moved into to 5

Nothing like an ST story,especially Justice O Peace. These stories are like a comfy pair of well broken in sneakers or that comfort food to get you through a tough day,and that is high praise.

My hero, Marshal Justice O. Peace, rides again to bring another evil woman to heel, or hell. Got James Ewell Brown Stuart, and some Yankees to beat back La Raza. Another great, entertaining story from saddletramp. I would like to have your imagination for about a week. I'd stay drunk and think up stories the whole time. I couldn't put them in any readable form, but I'd have a ball dreaming.

I enjoyed it, and would read Cheryl’s manuscript.

By later in the war JEB Stuart had clearly lost his touch. This aside from his treason and his fighting for the worst regime until the Third Reich. Who would want him in an angelic crusade for justice??

This one was a hard one to get into; once I got there I kept going. This was different.

You are truly my favorite author in Literotica. I look for your stories daily, and have enjoyed every one.

An unusual story - top notch!

Cheryl’s manuscript. Yeah baby!!!

Thanks

Wayne

in any way would be almost impossible. It takes her almost a year of being eaten alive be predators, healing up and going through it again the next day to feel any remorse. She doesn't deserve any kind of compassion or kindness. You would hope that this would have been set up as an eternal punishment. Lionel should have lived his life in comfort and peace with her money after having her declared dead. Then as he was just about to die 60 years later he pushed the button to release her. Compassion on his part, continuation of life for the useless skank. Hopefully with physical scars from being repeatedly torn apart and healing every day for decades.

Image her chained to the rock creating a pavlovian response in the vultures, coyotes ants and other scavengers. Sweet.

Another moron about history. And I'm directing this to you fossil brain.

Please take a stab at writing it. There is a potentially wonderful story there.

Another preposterous, wonderful story in the series. Will eagerly read the next one.

pain is a good teacher.

it can strip away ego, it can strip away bad logic, it can force empathy.

people against pain would argue, 'you can make someone agree to anything with enough pain.' true. but in this context, the agreement wasn't tyrannical. so it falls short as a rebuttal, it can only work out of context. and these same people have no answers for what would work. they only have criticisms of what would.

The manuscript would make an excellent story. Diary of a Mad Bitch.

I didn't see that being married had anything to do with the plot. The story referred to a marriage that had died, but the substance of the story was all the fantasy magic and details of the recovery and retribution. Putting a bullet through the gangster's head was way too quick and painless, while the wife suffered agonizing torture for months. Seemed kind of unbalanced.

Anyway, that the husband tolerated her shit for so long indicates he had neither the gumption nor the confidence to be a real man. Makes her adultery seem logical, or at least understandable.

It was a far out odd LW story. Thanks for the effort.

I really enjoy the Justice stories. Keep them coming, and Cheryls manuscript too.

Thanks for all your great stories.

I liked this because you wrote a story, not just a btb.

I enjoyed the story. maybe I would enjoy the manuscripts better. for me, the suicide was a weak point. repentant is one thing, her heart changed, but killing herself?!?

Justice is a great series. I hope you continue it.

Keep on writing. Enjoying the J O Peace stories.

Never mind the nit pickers.

5/5

Please write on, your stories are different and refreshing.

Well, you get a two stars for for creativity and one more for sci-fi, but that's it. This is silly stuff.

3*

I would like to see what you can do with her manuscript!

Please turn the manuscript into a story. I look forward to each new story from you. Have you ever thought about stitching them together and turning them into a novel?

I thoroughly enjoyed all three parts!

You have a very wild imagination. But I gotta say, you weave a pretty darn entertaining story. I look forward to the next chapter. Oh, one more thing: No credit to Warren Zevon for the title?

Please keep this going. I love the time aspect as well as the basic bbt.

Cheryl left Lionel an awful lot of loopholes in how he could count to 100 before taking his blindfold off. She didn't specifically tell him to count to one hundred SLOWLY. So he could have just counted off 100 seconds, just over a minute-and-a-half, then taken off the blindfold. Even faster, count off by twenty-five. A little slower, count off by tens. A little slower still, count by fives. I'd probably have gone with counting by tens, personally.

Please write more Justice stories. These are fantastic. Best stories in the world.

Please write more Justice stories. These should be on the bestseller list

Excellent. Certainly needs a continuation, not just with the story of Cheryl.

The vengeance meted out by the Posse and Great great etc etc Grandad is a novel twist and highly entertaining.

Have 5***** on me and definitely a follower.

Yea Ha, nothing better than a Western Shoot-Em-Up where the good guys win. What a refreshing series. 5 from this boy.

Wonderful story of wild imagination!!!! Few authors can merge what you do and make the reader feel as though they are actually there. Keep up the great work!!!

I could read this story for a long time. Brilliant

Awesome series. Great BTB retribution!!!

can take old history, tales and legends, fold them into a new tale using writers license. TK U MLJ LV NV

Little bit of history in the story little bit of Warren Devon in the title. Love all of the Justice series. I live in Texas and love packing ruger blackhawk in 45 long colt when I'm working or on a walk about.

I's love to read Cheryl's story; so enjoyed this one!

And I LOVE it!! Quite well written, really well paced, and damned interesting.

Keep 'em comin'.

Would be more enjoyable if the conversations between characters were even a little bit like humans actually speak.

Enjoyable. I would enjoy more as well.

This is another great read from you.

I know I am a little behind in reading your stories. I do like how you have been tying them into touching each other. The tip of the spear looks be on its way to be as good as your others.

I will have to vote, " HECK Yes," to your writing the manuscript into a story series.

Your ability to tell a yarn is wonderful.

Thank you for keeping the stories rolling out.

Those at Ft Sumpter were years late to the party. Open armed conflict had been going on for years in Kansas and Missouri.

Fun one!!!

quite a fantasy

Just saw on Twitter that ST is working on a prequel to this series. I can't wait to read that!

Absolutely outstanding as always. I’m trying to read everything you’ve written and haven’t found a single one that hadn’t earned 5 stars from me. You have an amazing talent. I hope you do, or already have, turn(ed) the manuscript into a story. It be intriguing to know what she went through through that year and what eventually led her to repent.

Great tale. And yes, the follow up would be very well received, if it hasn’t been already.

I love your universe

Great story

Great story would be interesting to see what Cheryl wrote. 5/5

Stories in this series are "feel good" and are truly entertaining. I appreciate the imagination of the writer along with the style of expression. The melding of Union and Confederate legends along with so much history adds to an exciting read. Great job, Author!

You know, I don't doubt that that could, would, or will happen, if it already hasn't. We get a chance to live a lifetime on this planet, but we never find out why. We kind of leave the same way we came in. But my take is that its never over, it's just different the next time. Great read, as usually. Keep writing.

XYZ

These are the best stories I have read so far in Literotica in this category. Onward to the next story.

Hope you write the manuscript story. I like reading your stories

Damn, I love this story! 5 BIG ONES!

Great story! I love your writing.

Louis Vanderwilt, DSM, Iowa

Another master piece. Cheryl's manuscript turned into a story would be a nice idea. Not sure if I will ever take a stab at wring Cheryl's story, actually I am pretty sure I will not but you never know......Elijah may step in and give me some inspiration.

The story would have been more enjoyable if you hadn't included a traitor who fought to continue the enslavement of human beings. JEB Stuart was no hero I doubt hell let him out so he could ride again. Your story, your universe but to me it tarnished any sense of justice being served

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