All Comments on 'Justice Ch. 04: Old Scores'

Thank you for this.

yes very good keep it up 5 stars as usual

Thanks! Helps explain a few things. Love the "eye dee" part.

But it was another BTB story where the adulteress dies. Except for that attempt to satisfy everyone, it was a solid story.

Damn i love these stories, such a twist on the run of the mill stuff on this site. please keep em coming. love them all, and finally Thank you for your imagination.

The constant switching of POV and going from third to first person made a garbage can of a story.

ST! Always enjoy more stories in this series! I always picture ,Sam Eliot, as Eli!

Great addition to the "Justice" group!

Great yarn!!! Your style makes 19K words seem like a short story. Look forward to wherever your mind leads you sir.

Wonderfully entertaining story! I'm very enamored with the whole concept of the Old West, Civil War, Paranormal mystery, and current day crime plots all interwoven into a cheating wife BTB. If nothing else you are a very solid writer and a imaginative genius. Another 5 star effort!

Can't nobody! Can't nobody! Write a story like Saddletramp.

I have read all of your stories so I easily recognized characters from other stories. You do this better than anyone.

Your stories continue to improve with each submission. 5*

There was a lot of good lead up until the end, but it just felt to me that the end was rushed. Within half a page Danni gets kidnapped, transported, they find her when they couldn't find the villain before and then the villain is dead, and the conflict is resolved. It felt that with all the effort and background story, the end should have been a bit more drawn out.

Magic! 5 stars

from the ordinary stories of cuckholds

Another great tale. My one note would be that Texans talking to other Texans, are not going to use the term, 'Texas Ranger', especially over and over; they would just say 'Ranger'. The 'Texas' part is already inferred.

What can I say, another 5* story in this series. Sorta read to me like the end of it.. hope not.

Always enjoy the adventures of Justice - Happy New Year! 5*

Great story. Justice O. Peace is one of my favorite characters.

Keep em coming ST, in this dark sad world we need some sheer escapism and your stuff is certainly that. Thank you.

I enjoyed this!!!

SADDLETRAMP1956 HIT'S IT OUTTA THE PARK AGAIN!

10 STARS!!!

I fell asleep, what did I miss?

Preposterous, enjoyable story. Keep 'em coming.

Excellent read.

Just a minor point - I've read the other stories, but it's been almost nine months since the last chapter, a brief summary of the prior chapters would be helpful/

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I know it's a cliche, but pussies don't get permanently stretched out by large cocks.

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Five pages for a fast resolution with no drama.

Just because a story contains married people does not make it a Loving Wives story. When you include the Fantasy aspects the whole story become irrelevant to Loving Wives. Oh, wait, you included the married whore who got pregnant by the reincarnated ghost with the big cock. OK, one married woman fucking a big cock for 1% of the story, guess that's as much justification as some people need.

What's always puzzling about stories like this is they inescapably imply that, while there is Evil and Satan and bad ghosts, there is no God. Or if there is a God He/She doesn't really have much power or effectiveness. Sometime Good wins, and sometimes Evil wins; its just a tossup. That's God as wimp, or a being that can sometimes be overcome, defeated. Like I said, these types of stories deny the existence of God.

Which is OK, it just makes the entire story line ridiculous and irrelevant to anything in real life. Just because a story is fiction doesn't mean it is unrealistic. "Huckleberry Finn" is great fiction, but nothing in it is fantasy. Huck's raft getting rammed by a Nazi submarine on the Mississippi River would be stupid and pointless. Maybe that analogy is lost on you.

So you can write what you want any way you want and call it whatever you want. Overall, It snot.

Thanks for the effort.

5 big fat ***** . I really like your stories. You always have a fun read up your writing sleeve. I also picture Sam Elliot as Eli. An earlier commenter mentioned the same thing. Another big KUDOS to my favorite author. Keep em coming

Love your world, and the characters that populate it! Are you planning a spin off with April and Jessica?

Really enjoyed the story! Don't worry about the complainers, other authors write similar stories and keep them in the loving wives category also!

Thanks again, for this one!

Jneric

In a shit week,a load of fun,thank you!

Not my cup of tea.

Another great story.

_ _ Another fine work sir. Thank you for your ongoing efforts.

Splendid yarn - My, but your universe has some rip-roaring tall tales within. Thanks for the entertainment.

After a shit week this was a fun read. I love the JOP stories. Keep 'em comin'!!

Another great trip to saddletramp world. All the heroes are here, but it’s Grandma Lizzie who shows up to put an end to Jack. Like the Westerns of Louis L’amour, saddletramp’s stories never get old or boring. Wrongs are righted, evil punished, and the good guys always win in saddletramp’s world. That’s fine with me.

Thanks Saddletramp.

Really like these Justice stories. Everyone of them are very Good. But then I like all of your stories.

Wow, what a great read. I have read quite a few of your stories. I am impressed by your knowledge of the metaphysical universe. Your research must have served you well. However, I believe that Spirit may have a hand in your work. Please keep writing, and keep listening to the soft voice that whispers to you.

Top Story!!

5 Stars ☆☆☆☆☆

I am not a paranormal fan , but you are a sublime story teller . I have a soft spot for Grandma Lizzie .

Thank you

Gaffer

But found the end a little too quick for me although Stephanie's demise was shocking but a great little cameo. Suppose if Justice couldn't track him then Danni's phone was the answer. The craftsmanship is excellent and the detail fabulous.

5 stars again. Well done indeed.

What a wonderful story of the adventures of Amos, Danni, Grandpa Elijah and Gramma Lizzy. Well Done 5 stars

Quick and simple ending. Love this series and the KARMA for cheating assholes!!!

I am amazed at how quickly I became a fan of Eli Jones and this series of stories. I hope to see more of this series soon,

And yet hugely entertaining. Not your best for pacing, Tramp, but still a complete vignette in the world of Eli and Amos. Thanks!

Keep 'em comin'.

I too find myself nicely entertained by you story. I've got to say though, those explorers of the paranormal, using men as human dildos, objectifying them: I'm appalled ;-)

Another great yarn, keep em coming,the nay sayers can go blow them self's

Great story, can't believe I've only just found this author. Looking forward to reading the rest of these stories, it will take me some time though.

Hey Tramp, been awhile since you've released a Justice story. How about a new one.

Some seriously weird cowboy shit Tramp. Seriously disturbing

Ha ha ha ha

Tramp bro.... Marvellous replica of Hollywood's THE MUMMY

i think Texas's mummy is more interesting than of Hollywood's

Keep the series alive

Waiting for new episodes

After a further re-read, I'm of the considered opinion this work needs to be in a category of ots own.. not that complaining, just saying it is deserving of a new place of its own. It is that good and different enough. Now, what would we call such a new category, "Paranormal Happenings?" Perhaps - but do keep writing. I do like such stories. Think you could turn this one into a script and make a movie?

Your Justice series should be out in hardback so everyone in the world could read them. I look forward to reading more of your Justice series as they come out. Thank you for being such a talented writer.

ST, didn't comment on this the first time I read it. I was wrong--my apologies! This is a great series that only improves over time. What an excellent series, and what a gift you have to write it!

Just saw on Twitter that ST is working on a prequel to this series. I can't wait to read that!

Great stories, well done

This could be my favorite series ever!!

I love your stories! But always lasagna and nothing but lasagna. Very poor menu!

Wonderful and educational and beautiful story

Just to great for words!

Lets keep on going to the next story. Can't stop reading these.

Boilerplate story. You need to change gears.

The earlier stories had a bit more detail. This one, well, you could have just changed it to, "Jack abducted Danni, Lizzie killed Jack, Ryan was confused, and paranormals got rich." OK, not THAT bad, but you have to agree that the story got a bit thin. Your story is good, though. I really like the series.

Excellent story! 5 BIG ONES!

Great story. Highly readable. And I loved the return of the grandparents scenes. I too loved my grandparents and miss them very much. Wish they could appear to me now and then same as Elijah and Lizzy.

I liked the story, but I had a problem with Lizzy dispatching Jack.

This was a deus ex machina resolution of the problem - the plot did not lead up to this resolution.

It is quite reasonable that Lizzy do the dispatching - she was the most aggrieved party, after all.

Up until this point, it sounded like it would be very difficult to dispatch Jack. And that likely there would be an extended scene where different things are tried until they finally figure out how to properly rid themselves of Jack.

But no, the scene was short because Lizzy all of the sudden appears with the "magic bullet".